Reviews for The Case of the Burning Body
Blythe Kearney chapter 10 . 9/7/2013
Great story, well written, Keep up the good work
Beverly chapter 10 . 8/22/2013
One of the best stories I've read in this forum! Congrats. Thanks for sharing. If possible please more!
murphycat chapter 10 . 2/13/2013
Great story. Plot line was really well done, but some mistakes kinda threw me off at times. Hope you write another. I loved that Della did the big reveal! Really good!
kaleen1212 chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Just fabulous! Murder, mystery, suspects up the ying yang, Della and Perry romance, Perry telling off that little witch and most of all the butler did it! Just fabulous!
Sweetbutterfly11 chapter 10 . 12/13/2012
Ive been waiting a long time for the rest of this story! It was worth the wait! Keep up the good jib! Cant wait to read more from you you!
tengland2 chapter 10 . 12/12/2012
Della certainly has learned well when it comes to questions and details from Perry, to much time investigating and reading. Diana still trying to get Perry's attention. Just doesn't get it. Now to get them home and take Della on a vacation just to recover. Really enjoyed this one.
tengland2 chapter 9 . 12/12/2012
Diana is such a spoiled young lady. Perhaps her father should just outright sell her car and cut off her lines of credit. Would be the start of teaching her a lesson. Glad the nurses realize she wasn't who she said she was. Interesting that the engagement ring was found in Perry's hand. Good question about the ring, if Randall put the orginal to be buried. Really getting interesting.
tengland2 chapter 8 . 12/12/2012
Got to give Della alot of credit, no help to the fact she's been hanging around Perry and Paul way to long. Getting a hold of the Sherriff and making sure no one gets to Perry except her and Paul. Diana trying so hard to take her out. Nicely done.
tengland2 chapter 7 . 12/12/2012
Ever business like, getting a tempory office set up for Perry. Defintely alot of tension between these two. Surprised at the history it seems between Raylynn and Paul. Perhaps its just me.
tengland2 chapter 6 . 12/12/2012
Diana may have rattled Della's cage, being so sure that she is what Perry wants, the perfect woman, perfect education, family, money, political ties. Della leaving Texas without him and if she doesnt she won't be long for LA. Picked the wrong person to tangle with and not realizing Perry is the one with the choice. Glad Paul has arrived. Hopefully he can help sort things out and keep Diana away from Perry. The woman is so determined to have him. Wondering just what did happen to Adam at the pool. Looking forward to more of this adventure.
tengland2 chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
Della and Perry certainly got an earful about the murders from their hiding spot. Adam was the one who caught Diana, those two have a volital relationship. Loved Della telling Perry she wasn't chasing after him for a kiss, witnesses and murders, yes, kisses no. Perry's advise to Adam, find his own "Della".
Interesting conversation about what happened all those years ago. The fact he went back to his home, looked around found the trunk with the evidence inside. Perry's going to get ahold of Paul to start an investigation. Just whose footsteps did Adam go in search off. Looking forward to finding out and see what else Diana is up to.
tengland2 chapter 4 . 12/12/2012
Calling Della the hired help, whoa. Della certainly knows her buttons are being pushed and just keeping quiet for the time being. Perry certainly made it clear to Adam, he wasn't letting Della get away and calling Diana, Miss White. Not mentioning his name with Della's he did lay their relationship out in front of strangers. Had a feeling Diana changed the place cards to end up next to Perry, glad Raylynn, strainghted her out. Diana just doesn't get it. Really enjoying this.
tengland2 chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Liked the way Perry came to get her, even though they had connecting rooms. Della's explination of how it got that way, nice conversation with Raylynn. Diana seems to be trying to move in on Perry's space. Either she doesn't know about Della or that Della is even there. Just got to the end, Diana,wants Perry and Della to get out of the way or get run over. Little does Diana know she's picked the wrong person to tangle with. (I hope).
tengland2 chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Atleast Perry got a heads up as to what was going on in Austin. Good thing Della got a Texas paper. Now Della has the details to the Randall story, poor Adam being so young and hearing what he heard. Just what are these two getting into. Adventure for sure. Nicely done, with the detailed information.
tengland2 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Interesting begining with the letter and group of characters. Press still bothers Perry, even arriving seperatly they managed to get their picture taken. Five bags, four packed, Della does have a point, never know what she's going to need. This seems to be one interesting adventure.
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