Reviews for Toadette's Tummy Trouble
Madz the Penguin chapter 2 . 1/2
I like this fanfiction! It's really good! Awww, poor Toadette; she has a stomachache. *rubs Toadette's stomach* Oh, how this reminds me of something I wrote! It had a Toad with the flu, and his belly hurt so much. He couldn't even get out of bed! At least he's better now, and I hope Toadette gets better soon.

However, there is one problem: the length. The chapters are too short, so you might want to make them longer. Other than that, it's good! Keep on going!

Madz the Penguin
pighat09 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
WHATS GONNA HAPPNE?! plz continue
Yoshizilla-Princess chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
Well, in that case, it serves Toadette right for eating the bananas that were literally outta date!
Subuku no Jess chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Hi. I have been reading some of your stories on here and they're really good. You really get into character and everything. Don't worry. I have a vore fetish and I make fun of it all the time, so you're not alone.

Looks like Toadette's got a stomach ache and really, no one listens to Petey. He's like one of the characters with sense.

Anyway, I like this so far! Please continue?

Jess