|Reviews for Your Waiting for a Train|
| Shembre chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Again very pretty. :)
| Shembre chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
"Because I knew deep down that the answer wasn't as important as the fact that if no one else got off the train, I wouldn't get off, either. It was kind of the inverse of the question "if all your friends were jumping off a bridge, would you jump off, too?""
Loved that line, it was so pretty! I really like the language and the sentence structure that you use throughout your story. Nice work! :)
| SpyroAgain chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Wow... This was the first inception fic I've read. And I must say, I am not disappointed. This was poetic and really made me think on the path that the speaker was on.