Reviews for Melting a cold heart
Airaliderp chapter 6 . 10/11
I can't even if live it it made me laugh and cry over my god thus is now my favorite derpxdoc fan fiction because it don't show the innocent Derby it shows all kinds of things and I live it
Dr Wd MLP chapter 6 . 8/3/2014
Beautiful story.
The Crimson Dazzle chapter 6 . 1/21/2014
Loved it to bits. To bloody, cross-eyed bits.
RunawayTARDIS chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
To be honest I didn't like it. It was still a good story but I'm not shure you got all the facts right when it came to picking things up with wings, although I'm not shure. Still I respect what you want to portray the characters as (seeing that they don't have a true backstory.)
And I encourage you to continue, no matter what people say.
LyraTheLastTimeLady chapter 6 . 8/14/2013
Wonderful! I love it! Very inspiring, keep up the good work! ;-)
Noyb chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
well this was really descriptive and had great flavor but derpy is more of a sweet kind-of silly girl more unused to things and i think making her this tough girl was good but i am so used to her being silly i was a little shocked.
Elegy chapter 6 . 2/18/2013
I really enjoyed your story I especially liked the ending how it wasn't really sappy that way it matched derpys personality more :) good job
elenahedgehog chapter 6 . 2/18/2013
oh my god i love it... i love you very much
Guest chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
pretty good story,thought about making a sequel?
ThE ToRtUrEd SOuL chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
pretty good story,lol kept in constant suspense right throughout. Thinking about making a sequel? you should make a sequel...
Dragon'z Wrath chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
Great story man. Loving the grittiness. Lol its a nice change of pace. Keep it up.
Justdon'twanna chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
1: Continue this! Now!
2: I never thought of Ditzy being cold, wish I would've!
3: Lots of run-on sentances, sweetie.
zsd brony chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
aw man not real hoping for a realy sappy thinking the cerry mere hitting colt would be comming after him or something but i do hope doctor help derpy her over self sins and all that stuff but to do something great you need to put hard work into it
ShiningShadow1965 chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
Wow that was a very awesome ending of this story. Wow dude you rock I enjoyed it bravo.
ShiningShadow1965 chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
Dude awesome, frigging chapter you rock I can't wait for the next chapter excellent bravo.
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