Reviews for After the Storm
kaylinthehuman chapter 9 . 4/9
I may have teared up at the end. Right in the feels. Ow.
kapurisudesu chapter 9 . 3/5
This made me cry... but I FREAKING LOVED IT! but I'm still crying... SO MANY EMOTIONS! ** but in this case, it's a good thing me thinks XD Keep writing awesome stuff!
Wuv you, K-chan xxx
PurpleFairy11 chapter 9 . 2/3
this is really good and sad please keep up the great work
Pollardinator chapter 11 . 8/14/2013
A great ending to a great story here my friend. A likeable OC,a meaningful story ture to the film,this is a very good story here. My only recomendation would be to change the description of the story. At the moment there isnt much of a hook to it which I think is holding back any potential readers. Message me if you need any help with that but eitehr way still a great story!
Pollardinator chapter 5 . 8/11/2013
Great first five chapters here. A really interesting idea and epligoue to the main film and I think you've definetly nailed the characters personalities,role and general style throughout. The only criticisim I can think of is that the chapters seem relatively short and that a bit more scene description at the start of each chapter would go a long way. But,besides that relativley small problem this is an ambitous and different take on the filma nd characters and I look forward to reading the rest!
TwilightGirl2012 chapter 9 . 1/12/2013
OMG this story is great! Please keep writing it! It's amazing! ;D
Guest chapter 5 . 12/22/2012
This is awesome! I love the character of Jack! I do have a question, if the girls were celebrating in the changing room, does that mean Blondie, Amber and Rocket are alive (at least, in the brothel reality)?