Reviews for Working Out
coldweathergal chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
"But he had left a chocolate bar on her desk for her."
For some reason that sentence made me want to bawl.
Angels-heart1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Awe, loved it!
Wolven316 chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I was very surprised at how much I liked this! I thought it was just going to be a little funny piece to pass my time but it turned out to me an interesting and captivation short story that had be giggling with anticipation the whole way through. Great job, I loved it!
wavesofred chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
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Loony-1995 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Great story, I loved the end - not only were you teasing Jane but you made me smile! :D
blueMnM415 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Hahaha! That was great, totally Jane being a creeper and getting busted for it. Nice work.
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jw chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
You are just such a wonderful lil stinker! I adored this; your Lisbon's one-up on Jane was priceless. And on behalf of that (very small, I assure you...) side of myself had carefully followed your A/N instructions and set aside Lisbon's brazen forwardness in keen anticipation (alright, almost as surely as your Jane) of sweaty lovins, I want to thank you for compassionately providing hope that at least poor bumfuzzeled Jane will eventually get some, even if I don't ; } Thanks, as always, for all the great fun!
Special Agent Baker chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
This was brilliant! I loved the little twist at the end. Lara :)
Cat1030 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Really really enjoyed this :)
Leasel P chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This was amazing! I love it :D
Hayseed Socrates chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This was fun. I love how Lisbon has him bumfuzzled.
ironseas chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
I loved this! I didn't expect it, but it makes sense that Lisbon would have noticed Jane during her runs in the park, seeing that she's a cop and has acute observation skills. I loved that Jane was rendered speechless - now that is something we rarely see!
inkstainedfingers97 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Um. You had me at the summary. Love stalker Jane and his fascination with Lisbon's legs. Also love Lisbon tricking him into running with her at the end. The whole story was a wonderful indulgence. Thank you for writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
lol absolutely hilarious, best fluff story I've red in along time
love the mysterious,
dancing through
phrynepuck chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
That was great, totally hilarious and fun! I was giggling the whole way through! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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