|Reviews for The Diary of Midshipman Deryn Sharp|
| MissyBailey chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
That was adorable! Your logic makes me laugh. You are beautiful.
| WerdnaTheRed chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
These were all a most deliciousnessable type of writing. While I was kinda lost at some points, it still made sense in the end. Sort of. Anyway these are really good, thanks.
| WerdnaTheRed chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2013
Lol thaz hilarious
| erica chapter 5 . 7/5/2013
OMG... this is so hilarious! You must keep updating! And don't worry, you actually depicted them quite in character. :)
| Middy Miles chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Trust me, hon, that was NOT short. I've seen some that are little more than a few lines.
Anyway, this isn't bad. You've managed to capitalize and punctuate where necessary, with few mistakes, which is always the first thing I look for :). You'll improve with time, I'm sure, but try to slow it down a little, add some more setting and scene descriptions. I know you're just trying to get the purpose across at this point, but, really, it isn't necessary to go into extensive detail, so just add a few things here and their. Maybe the toast could be burnt on a corner or something. I dunno.
And I think "midshipman" only has one "p"...
| Siri Kenobi95 chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Great chapters! Deryn is perfectly in character and it feels like it could actually fit into the Leviathan universe. And LOL at the Trousers and Newkirk incidents! XD
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
I fell sorry for Deryn. I really do. :P
I loved it! :D wright more please!
| MemyselfandI373 chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Heh, silly Newkirk. I like weird, so it's okay :)
| jibblitmuffins3675 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
I love it! Wright more! :D
| MemyselfandI373 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
'My favorite trousers!' Lol, nice job.