Reviews for Bleach: White Star Rising
ACSkywalker chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
If you are still looking fot OC's this is my character:
Name: AC Skywalker

Age: 17678

Appearance: A man with long spiky black and brown hair, moss green eyes and 4 distinctive scars on his face. He wears a black leather jacket with the collar sticking up and the zip open, under the leather jacket he wears a blue T-shirt with a skull on it, he also wears black jeans and sneakers. He has pointed elven ears. On his right wrist he wears a watch which also doubles as a Quincy bow. He also wears fingerless leather gloves and two necklaces made of wood that poses the souls of his dead wives.

Personality: Very enthusiastic but serious when he needs to be. He is also very inquisitive about everything. He also loves playing pranks. He can also be wise at times. He has genus level intelligence.

Race: Vizored but can use a few quincy type powers.

Zanpakuto, Quincy Blade or Doll: A purple Lightsaber Zanpakto called Rindaringu

Shikai, Bankai, Ressurecion or Final Form: Shikai allows AC to control the personal time of a person, meaning that he can force them to grow younger or older and send them though time. The Shikai looks almost like an ordinary lightsaber but with three ribbons of light twined around the blade. The chant for the Shikai is rend Rindaringu. The Bankai of this blade is called Tima Rindaringu. It looks like Ichigo's new Shikai. It allows AC to control all of time and relative space. AC also uses a Quincy bow. AC is also quite proficient in kido. He is also faster than Yoruichi.

History: AC wasn't cast out he left as he was bored and hated being stuck in one place too long with nothing new to research or discover. White star needed a research and development devision to get them from their base to the Soul Society. So he, on his travels met some White Star operatives and was asked to help. So he said yes and went to help.
ACSkywalker chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
If you'r still looking for OC's here is mine:

Name: AC Skywalker

Age: 17657

Appearance: A man with long spiky black and brown hair, moss green eyes and 4 distinctive scars on his face. He wears a black leather jacket with the collar sticking up and the zip open, under the leather jacket he wears a blue T-shirt with a skull on it, he also wears black jeans and sneakers. He also has pointed elven ears. He also wears fingerless leather gloves and two necklaces made of wood that poses the souls of his dead wives. He is 6 foot 3 inches.

Personality: Very enthusiastic but serious when he needs to be. He is also very inquisitive about everything.

Race: Vizored but can use a few quincy type powers.

Zanpakuto, Quincy Blade or Doll: A purple Lightsaber Zanpakto called Rindaringu

Shikai, Bankai, Ressurecion or Final Form: Shikai allows AC to control the personal time of a person, meaning that he can force them to grow younger or older and send them though time. The Shikai looks almost like an ordinary lightsaber but with three ribbons of light twined around the blade. The chant for the Shikai is rend Rindaringu. The Bankai of this blade is called Tima Rindaringu. It looks like Ichigo's new Shikai. It allows AC to control all of time and relative space. AC also uses a Quincy bow.

History: AC wasn't cast out he left as he was bored and hated being stuck in one place too long with nothing new to research or discover. White star needed a research and development devision to get them from their base to the Soul Society. So he, on his travels met some White Star operatives and was asked to help.
ShinBP chapter 2 . 12/24/2012
hope you update soon, this is really interesting!
CelestialxXxAngel chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
This is really interesting! Please write more! Anyway, do you still accept OC? I hope yes, I'll send it with pm.
ChieLuvsBleach chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
OCs are still accepted, yes? If so, here's mine:

Name: Myou Usagi

Age: Born during the birth of the 13 court guard squads.

Appearance: Despite her age, Myou appears as a girl in her late teens with fair skin and a curvy figure, standing at 5'3". Her eyes are large and a dark midnight blue in colour, her hair is waist-length and deep purple with lighter purple highlights and she keeps it in three ponytails; one high on the left side of her head, another low on the right side of her head and the last on the lower left of her head. She has an uneven fringe that slopes down to the left side of her head. She prefers to wear clothes that're easy to move around in and so dons a dark purple cropped T-shirt, hot pants in the same colour and flat-heeled, thigh-high boots in black. She also has black fingerless gloves that reach half way up her upper arm. Every part of her outfit is etched with a different kind of design in light purple, some may call them runes. On her back she wears two black cloaks, also inscribed with these mystical runes, the back one larger than the front. Attached to the back of the smaller cloak she keeps a whole army's worth of weapons, covered up by the larger clock on her back.

Personality: Cutthroat and ruthless, but still with a charming, flirtatious side to her, Myou is a very violent person whose respect is hard to gain. She usually prefers to stand alone but when a goal is shared she will not hesitate to join a team for her own selfish needs. Around those she considers allies, Myou acts level-headed and smart, but still enjoys to tease. Myou is hard to impress or intimidate in any situation and always thinks of herself as the strongest in battle, and hates to be proven otherwise. Myou is notorious for killing with no traces of remorse and does so simply for the thrill of it. The only people that she would never hurt is those she truly respects.

Race: Shinigami

Zanpakuto: 殺人者 - Satsujinsha (killer; murderer), summoned with, "Draw blood, and leave no trace." In its normal form, it is uncertain what it looks like because its always hidden amongst the multitude of weapons in her cloak.

Shikai, Bankai: In shikai she has the ability to change her blade into any one of three different weapons at any time. The first is an ordinary katana, tainted the colour of blood. She uses this weapon for slow, painful deaths as it doesn't cut that deep but inflicts powerful poison upon the opponent. The second is a large, double-bladed axe, each blade as tall as Myou. Although large, the blade isn't very heavy, and is in fact very thin. Used for quick, clean cuts and painless deaths. The third is a Tanto that steals reiatsu and eliminates all traces of the victim, but it will only work if the opponent submits and so she will only use it when they are very weak.
Bankai: 殺人鬼 - Satsujinki (which means literally murder devil) She is able to change her weapon into any weapon she can imagine, though smaller is more powerful. The power of some of these weapons is so fantastic that one cannot imagine how brilliant and exciting each weapon can be. The catch? Each slash drains her reiatsu in very large amounts.

History: Myou liked being strong. She liked it a lot; maybe you could say she liked it a little too much. It was her one goal; she MUST be the strongest. That was why when the 13 Court Guard Squads were born she didn't become a captain. The first Kenpachi beat the young woman with little-to-no effort. They all called her weak and turned her away. In a fit of rage, she turned against the Soul Society and murdered more than half of the captains during the night. To her, it felt like such a thrill. The heads rolling across the floor, the smell of fresh blood, the taste of victory... Such a thrill. Once they had discovered she was guilty she was banished from the Soul Society with the most powerful of Kidos, but after stealing the books made up of every forbidden Kido spell that ever existed, she was all set to go. After inscribing every Kido onto her clothes in the form of ancient runes, Myou was ready to show the world just how powerful she really was.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
The one person Kenpachi remembers respecting is this guy's wife?!
San child of the wolves chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This is cool and interesting. I'll send in my character through pm.