|Reviews for Council's Folly|
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 34 . 4/30
There are several points in this story, towards the beginning, where I wanted to quit. So much tripped my bullshit sensors. But I didn't, I kept going. And I'm glad I didn't.
The humanity of the characters shined through, and the quotes from the Dresden Files also helped.
| Reclusive Dork chapter 34 . 4/29
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/24
it is like putting the hose beore the cart isit like marring with caels to
| justsomerealguy chapter 34 . 4/25
Here's hoping Kurotsuchi survives...but she probably won't. Kinda wish she gets added to Uzumaki clan. I'm a bit of a 'perfect world' type person.
| justsomerealguy chapter 17 . 4/24
Awwwww... Tayuya died.
| Guest chapter 34 . 4/20
Please hurry up and post the new chapter... I'm dying to find out what happens next! And you have written a very good story by the way!
| mauricio.hoolehan chapter 34 . 4/16
Please keep it dude you Gir me hooked on the first chapter and I can't wait to see how you finish this.
| sstabeler chapter 34 . 4/16
I don't think Kurotsuchi should be killed- for three reasons- One, she made an attempt to avoid having to do her orders. Second, by my read of it, she is taking Naruto's kid back to Konoha- assuming she isn't merely trying to save her own skin, it argues that she isn't irredeemably bad. (Though she's not good either.) Third, she was originally part of a group of three- it's not entirely clear how much was her idea. On the other hand, she DOES need to be punished. Off the top of my head, while I'd allow her to defect to Konoha, I would bar her from missions higher than D-Rank for a couple of years (with plenty of catching Tora misisons among them) & force her to guard naruto similarly to how Yugao guards Temari. Though with yugao keepng a sharp eye on her to make sure she tries nothing funny)- and she can only get the base pay of a ninja of whatever rank she is, with the mission pay for the D-ranks she is assigned going to Naruto & Temari. Oh, and for obvious reasons, have either a Yamanka or T&I ( or both) make sure she isn't going to try and pull anything else.
| Chaoticist chapter 9 . 4/14
The ending quote was oddly appropriate...
| Chaoticist chapter 3 . 4/14
I love that you keep quoting the Dresden Files. Harry Dresden spouts some wisdom for a man in his late thirties who has had as much crap kicked out of him as Harry has.
| Mofaabsa chapter 34 . 4/12
Great to have you back Agg, hope whatever is preventing you from writing more clears up, because this story truely deserves to reach an end.
| Imaguest chapter 34 . 4/10
Yo. Storm Front was really good.
| Guest chapter 33 . 4/7
| Biscione chapter 34 . 4/7
Hopefully the kid isn't taken by Danzo.
Very little hope for Kuroat this point. ;_;
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 8 . 4/2
lost all interest with this chapter... Temari pregnant already? WTF, what happened to getting to know each other and shit? they have known each other for like 1-2 weeks, than there's the fact that Naruto is 12 - 13 and Temari is 14 - 15 (seriously, if you wanna do kids than do them towards the end)... you do realize that it takes around 5 - 9 days before you even have a chance to find out if your pregnant or not right? there is noway in hell Tsunade would "sense" a 2nd chakra
than we have Han, able to sneak into Konoha... that is complete and utter bullshit... Konoha has a barrier around it that detects all chakra entering and leaving it, only reason Itachi and Kisame could get in undetected was because Itachi was a former Anbu Captain and knew of it and how to get through it from that
Jiraiya saying only a Jinchuriki can fight another is beyond bullshit when a suppression seal will cut of all there chakra, any S-Ranked Shinobi can match and fight a Jinchuriki... Akatsuki would be pointless if they couldn't