|Reviews for Where there is a Flame|
| Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 3/15
This is a good start!
| Serendipity989 chapter 2 . 2/15
just thought I'd mention that Toothania can actually speak every language
| AltairSnow chapter 1 . 2/3
You need a period at the end of every sentence. It's extremely disorienting and annoying when you don't.
| Guest chapter 9 . 11/2/2017
| Christina chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
This story is perfect it shows a family realthionship without fully focusing on it. It also hurts Jack and gets him injured without making him weak. I also like how it keeps the characters in character and uses fire without having a fire powered enemy
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2017
Wow! That's all I can say. The story is definitely spicy:) So, when's the next chapter coming up? Can't wait!
| narutofanficlov321 chapter 9 . 10/17/2016
NEEDS SEQUEL SO BAD LOVED IT
| DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 9 . 6/5/2016
AHHHHHHH Y the cliffie?! !?
| Natsuki D chapter 9 . 5/21/2016
Is the sequel out yet?
Can't wait for more •/
Love the story
| Cherrycola chapter 2 . 3/13/2016
Is it Pitch Black?
| WhiteTigerYay chapter 8 . 3/9/2016
This is really good! I love your writing style:)
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/16/2016
Oh please tell me there is a sequal for this
| narutovsitachi6 chapter 7 . 11/8/2015
jeez, Gabriel is kind of a jerk, just because jack saved a close friend he gets a harm threat from Gabriel "just because jack did a job meant for a saint. other then that, I love the story
| Tigers Fire chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Where there is his name there is gonna be a flame
where there is a flame someones bound to get burnt
but just because it burn doesn't mean your gonna die
you gotta get up and try,try,try
you gotta get up and try try try
| Lovepatrolalpha1344 chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
Oh my gosh! I loved how Jack kept begging for his pants, and then Bunny's like, "Now you're whining just to whine." "Well it got my pants back didn't it?" I literally laughed out loud at that. Also, is it just me, or does the mystery person at the end seem a lot like slender man? I don't know very much about slender man, but what I do know just seems to fit. Anyway, loved this story! Great job!