|Reviews for Where there is a Flame|
| DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 9 . 6/5
AHHHHHHH Y the cliffie?! !?
| Natsuki D chapter 9 . 5/21
Is the sequel out yet?
Can't wait for more •/
Love the story
| Cherrycola chapter 2 . 3/13
Is it Pitch Black?
| WhiteTigerYay chapter 8 . 3/9
This is really good! I love your writing style:)
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/16
Oh please tell me there is a sequal for this
| narutovsitachi6 chapter 7 . 11/8/2015
jeez, Gabriel is kind of a jerk, just because jack saved a close friend he gets a harm threat from Gabriel "just because jack did a job meant for a saint. other then that, I love the story
| Tigers Fire chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Where there is his name there is gonna be a flame
where there is a flame someones bound to get burnt
but just because it burn doesn't mean your gonna die
you gotta get up and try,try,try
you gotta get up and try try try
| Lovepatrolalpha1344 chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
Oh my gosh! I loved how Jack kept begging for his pants, and then Bunny's like, "Now you're whining just to whine." "Well it got my pants back didn't it?" I literally laughed out loud at that. Also, is it just me, or does the mystery person at the end seem a lot like slender man? I don't know very much about slender man, but what I do know just seems to fit. Anyway, loved this story! Great job!
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2015
| Kyd wykkyd chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Awesome! Please write more!
| Zyenna chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
I like this story, I'm anxious to find out what this faceless evil is...
| jessLpfy chapter 9 . 2/2/2015
Thanks for the write!
| queenlaur chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
nice rap up, and then BAM! your really good at drawing people in! Did you do reaserch on burn treatment, your story seems soooooo realistic, I got so into it i could almost feel the pain Jack was feeling!
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2015
Pffffffffffft...lol jack heheh
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2015
Poor jack ;-;