Reviews for Where there is a Flame
DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 9 . 6/5
AHHHHHHH Y the cliffie?! !?
Natsuki D chapter 9 . 5/21
Is the sequel out yet?
Can't wait for more •/
Love the story
Cherrycola chapter 2 . 3/13
Is it Pitch Black?
WhiteTigerYay chapter 8 . 3/9
This is really good! I love your writing style:)
Guest chapter 9 . 2/16
Oh please tell me there is a sequal for this
narutovsitachi6 chapter 7 . 11/8/2015
jeez, Gabriel is kind of a jerk, just because jack saved a close friend he gets a harm threat from Gabriel "just because jack did a job meant for a saint. other then that, I love the story
Tigers Fire chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Where there is his name there is gonna be a flame
where there is a flame someones bound to get burnt
but just because it burn doesn't mean your gonna die
you gotta get up and try,try,try
you gotta get up and try try try
Lovepatrolalpha1344 chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
Oh my gosh! I loved how Jack kept begging for his pants, and then Bunny's like, "Now you're whining just to whine." "Well it got my pants back didn't it?" I literally laughed out loud at that. Also, is it just me, or does the mystery person at the end seem a lot like slender man? I don't know very much about slender man, but what I do know just seems to fit. Anyway, loved this story! Great job!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2015
Update soon
Kyd wykkyd chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Awesome! Please write more!
Zyenna chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
I like this story, I'm anxious to find out what this faceless evil is...
jessLpfy chapter 9 . 2/2/2015
Thanks for the write!
queenlaur chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
nice rap up, and then BAM! your really good at drawing people in! Did you do reaserch on burn treatment, your story seems soooooo realistic, I got so into it i could almost feel the pain Jack was feeling!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2015
Pffffffffffft...lol jack heheh
Guest chapter 2 . 1/24/2015
Poor jack ;-;
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