Reviews for Where there is a Flame
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 3/15
This is a good start!
Serendipity989 chapter 2 . 2/15
just thought I'd mention that Toothania can actually speak every language
AltairSnow chapter 1 . 2/3
You need a period at the end of every sentence. It's extremely disorienting and annoying when you don't.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/2/2017
More please
Christina chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
This story is perfect it shows a family realthionship without fully focusing on it. It also hurts Jack and gets him injured without making him weak. I also like how it keeps the characters in character and uses fire without having a fire powered enemy
Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2017
Wow! That's all I can say. The story is definitely spicy:) So, when's the next chapter coming up? Can't wait!
narutofanficlov321 chapter 9 . 10/17/2016
NEEDS SEQUEL SO BAD LOVED IT
DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 9 . 6/5/2016
AHHHHHHH Y the cliffie?! !?
Natsuki D chapter 9 . 5/21/2016
Is the sequel out yet?
Can't wait for more •/
Love the story
Cherrycola chapter 2 . 3/13/2016
Is it Pitch Black?
WhiteTigerYay chapter 8 . 3/9/2016
This is really good! I love your writing style:)
Guest chapter 9 . 2/16/2016
Oh please tell me there is a sequal for this
narutovsitachi6 chapter 7 . 11/8/2015
jeez, Gabriel is kind of a jerk, just because jack saved a close friend he gets a harm threat from Gabriel "just because jack did a job meant for a saint. other then that, I love the story
Tigers Fire chapter 1 . 11/4/2015
Where there is his name there is gonna be a flame
where there is a flame someones bound to get burnt
but just because it burn doesn't mean your gonna die
you gotta get up and try,try,try
you gotta get up and try try try
Lovepatrolalpha1344 chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
Oh my gosh! I loved how Jack kept begging for his pants, and then Bunny's like, "Now you're whining just to whine." "Well it got my pants back didn't it?" I literally laughed out loud at that. Also, is it just me, or does the mystery person at the end seem a lot like slender man? I don't know very much about slender man, but what I do know just seems to fit. Anyway, loved this story! Great job!
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