Reviews for The Pathology in the Partnerships
Labyrinth01 chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
It is with utmost horror that I realized I had never reviewed this story, despite reading it several times. This is incredibly well-written. I love the underlying theme of pathology, from Tim Martin to Pope, and then to herself. You really crawled into Brenda's head and showed us all the fear and insecurity reflected on her face at the end of Blue Blood. I really felt for her, how afraid of herself and that she would drag Fritz down with her, and yet at the end, she realizes she can change. I love it.
Cocobelle chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Love it! I teared up. So sweet and so Brenda and Fritz. Write more please!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I loved this story. It was so sweet. I'm sorry to see that it was so sweet. I'd love to see it continued.
ManateeMama chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
This is a wonderful story. I've often wished we could see the conversation when Brenda tells Fritz that he can move in. She certainly hasn't overcome her fears. All of her past failures have to be front and center in her mind. I love the way you incorporated her fears into this story. And the way she just blurted out her question about the closet to Fritz was so Brenda. Great job!