Reviews for Noticing a Heart
Salome Maranya chapter 10 . 7/8/2015
She really does like him doesn't she? If anyone purposely hit me on the face with a basketball I'd probably throw it back or at least get visibly irritated.
Salome Maranya chapter 5 . 7/8/2015
I'd say Kasamatsu's OOC but let's just say he's feeling, uh, brotherly? XDD or when he really likes someone he becomes really smooth as if the awkwardness was myth.
Salome Maranya chapter 3 . 7/8/2015
Was this an edited reader insert? Some of the pronouns were mixed up but other than that the rest was okay. :)
team natsu and wendy 4 life chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
it was cute and fluffy and i was smiling the whole time
one thing though is that i think they got together too fast but since it was a mini story i guess i can see why
also i kinda was hoping for a mention to other GoM but again its a short story and i realize that you cant put everything into it
have you considered writing a longer story?
akagami hime chan chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
Awwwwwww gosh. That was so fluffy and sweet! i loved it. :3
CrystalBud chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
that was so cute :D
CrystalBud chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
poor thing, i really like this story, longer chapters would be nice :D
justareadernow chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
Hoeee this story is so kawaii desu!
I looove it!
Ninja99 chapter 11 . 3/12/2013
cute! :D
louisielove chapter 11 . 2/23/2013
hahaha i love it! :))
Oluhasuu chapter 9 . 2/17/2013
wow worked fast kufufuffu
Oluhasuu chapter 7 . 2/17/2013
poor kise
Perryels chapter 11 . 2/8/2013
Oh no, it's over. But very cute ending. This had been a good read :)
Rasielis chapter 11 . 2/1/2013
Ah How sweet, very good here KizunaCho-san!
Devilish-S chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
Cute!Love it!
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