|Reviews for Forever & Always|
| Kitten60 chapter 3 . 1/26
Love the story, PLEASE! Finish it.
| whitebuffalowmn chapter 3 . 12/25/2013
I sincerely hope that you haven't gave up on this story. It's a very good one
thank you for your time and effort
| JackFrostforever chapter 3 . 10/8/2013
I was thinking Caleb Knight for Harry and Henry Knight for Severus. I was also thinking that they should go to a small town in Indiana.
| Miriam1 chapter 3 . 9/25/2013
This is intriguing. I like what you've done with this.
I recommend that you work with a country that has a culture you are at least passingly familiar with. Remember: the point of this story is the character development of your characters, not to muddle yourself or your audience with detail that might be interesting but is irrelevant to your plot.
That being said, I look forward to your next installment.
| OzwynneLeighAldren chapter 3 . 8/8/2013
This fic is genius, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/6/2013
| PurpleBullet chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
I love this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
| johnny.vick chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
omg omg more more please please more more
| XxShadowfangxX chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
Love your story! Look forward to reading more!
| Saint Snape chapter 3 . 3/18/2013
Enjoying the story.
| The Lonely God With a Box chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
Oh, I love this one so much too! Russia sounds great. I happen to know a good deal about Russia (can't speak Russian) but I used to obsess about Russian culture. I'd be happy to help you out with Russian stuff. Will they tell the Russians that they emigrated from England? I like the names too, as long as they tell the Russian Muggles that they came from England, or the last names seem funny.
Just as a side note, you started the third chapter in the present tense after having written two in the past and then switched back to past tense. I found the present tense part a bit difficult to read, but still enjoyable.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2013
How about Clerny for a last name; it's slovak for black or dark; perhaps Ponury which means dark, gloomy or cheerless. Temnaya means dark in Russian.
As far as first names, well, there are some common first names that I would use instead of Johnathan and Richard as they are not very Russian.
Boris, Andrei, Anton, Alexander, Vlad, Viktor, Grigory, Denis, Dmitry, Ivan, Igor, Lev/Leo, Maxim, Mark, Nikolay, Pavel, Peter, Roman, Sergei, Spartak, Erik and Yury are all common Russian names for boys that I got from a site for Russian Baby Names for Boys. They are in the top 90 most common. It would be better to use a Russian name because Richard and Johnathan are European and will stand out among the Russians so that if Dumbledore ever does think about that country, they would be easier to find.
As far as speaking Russian, you don't have to. Just explain at the beginning of the chapter that words in bold, undrelined or italics are spoken in Russian.
You could have Russia think of Voldemort as being a nutter and the idea of Pureblood supremacy as idiocy and stupidity. Also, I would think Moscow and St. Petersburg would both be too obvious. Send them to Tulun, Kanash or Monchegorsk, as they are 3 of the 5 least populated cities in the former USSR. You can write that they are living in a small city outside of Tulun which escaped the worst of the communist rule, or something like that, and that Severus now is acting like a healer/doctor among the city's inhabitants as well as potions master/pharmacist. They would most assuredly make a bond with him and if Dumbledore sniffed around, they would help hide and protect him.
Also, they could understand and help train and even protect Harry from LV.
| graynavarre chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I just started this and am enjoying it very much
| Jannafrancine chapter 3 . 1/27/2013
Great chapter. I understand that updates will be slow, school should be the priority. As for names how about Sebastian for Severus I doubt anyone would think he would pick a name that when shortened would sound similar to is real name. Johnathan would be a good name for Harry. With Harry/Johnathan being only 15 to 18 mo. he would still be able to call Severus/Sebastian Daddy Sev but have people think he is trying to say Daddy Seb (got to love baby talk). As for where they go I like the Russia idea. However I had a idea, instead of Karkaroff teaching/ becoming Headmaster of Durmstrang you should have Severus take his place. If you do you can also have Draco attend Durmstrang like his father wanted him too. That way Harry and Draco can become friends.
| Miss Rose Weasley chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
If you were to send them to China, I know a bit about it and my best friend is a full-blooded Chinese girl living there. I could contact her for details.
I like this fic a lot btw