Reviews for Place Among the Ashes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter was so well written, and I love greybacks character. will you be going back to the story "deliver us from sorrows hold" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would really love to see this updated. The characters are gripping, and I would love to see more of Greyback's sons and Harry growing into a role, a powerful member, a feared personality within the pack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so good! I love how you write your characters,you have me hooked. |
![]() ![]() "He didn't need someone—a stranger— to emphasize the severity of an issue that he'd already solved." He's not a stranger, he's the beta of the pack that Harry put in danger. And if you are really sorry you don't get offended when people bring it up |
![]() ![]() Aelius had every right to be angry at Harry and speak to him like that. Harry feels...no guilt at his actions? |
![]() ![]() "With five members already removed from his pack, Greyback refused to exile any more pack mates. " Is getting Harry even worth this? And really Harry? He wasn't treated so bad so werewolves must be ok? His willfull ignorance is somewhat in character but hard to read. |
![]() ![]() Poor Harry doesnt even understand he was abused. Ans stupid stupid meddling Dumbledore did everything he could to keep him with his abusers. |
![]() ![]() "So, essentially, the rewarded a man who destroyed countless of lives," Harry murmured bitterly." Yes...but also saved his species from eradication by those same wizards. The wizards are coming off as more evil here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope u one day continue this,havnt seen Harry with this type of personality in your other stories so it's abit different. |
![]() ![]() I wish you would finish this. I adore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! I hope you don't plan to just leave it be and that you'll update at some point! ~moonrabbit04 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can i finish it? |