Reviews for Not a Bodyguard
Catherineinthebluebox chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
FlashFiction chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I love watching Minerva try to maintain her exterior in generally hilarious situations! This is a really nice story and I like the interaction between them.
Panultimate chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Marvelous, and very in character for both of them
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Very real, very good. Keep writing
IforIgnore chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I never thought of a young!Bill, this was very good. :)
MissingMommy chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
*glomps Bill* I love him. He's wonderful. (Though, I don't love him as much as Charlie, but I'm sure that's a given already!)

This just made me giggle. A totally different side to Bill than I've written before - you know, I always seem to write him as the very wise older brother. But I liked this kind of cheeky side to him.

Also, I'm inclined to think that Bill would've known what he was going to do with his life. However, the way you write it here makes it understandable as to why he doesn't. I loved the reference to Charlie. (No surprise there?)

"You want me to tag-along after some fancy-pants Ministry official all day" - this had me laughing so, so hard. I just like the fact that you used "fancy" and "pants" in the same sentence. (I really must learn how to say that in a different language.

Overall, awesome. Bill was wonderful! :D