Reviews for Harry Potter and the Founder's Chamber
misherukuro chapter 5 . 6h
Thanks for the read. ,
CreslinWest chapter 9 . 2/17
I started reading this story only because you said it wasn't going to be a harem story, and I thought you were going to pull of something truly original and then in this very last chapter you explain "oh I don't think of this as a harem story because harem stories are graphic."

That's ridiculous a harem story is a story in which Harry has two or more wives (ie a harem) as such this IS a harem story. You should just own up to that fact. You already said in your introduction that the story wasn't going to be smutty or explicit.

I did like the duel scene it was particularly descriptive and quite exciting.
healingcat chapter 9 . 11/4/2014
Thanks for writing. I did find the ending a bit abrupt, but I can't write a decent story to save my life so have no room to whine about someone else's story.
Bobmin356 chapter 8 . 9/8/2014
Neville was also prevented from entering the dueling arena because (c) the author, like so many others, hasn't a clue what the real role of a second was in historical dueling.

The second was there to hold the coat of his duelist, to make sure that NO ONE outside of the two duelers tried to interfere and to see to his friend's wounds, or bring his body home should he lose the also ensured that the weapons being used were in good working order and as they moved from swords to guns, that the powder was dry and the gun properly loaded. At no point in time did the second jump into the fight.

So Rosier jumping into the fight makes no sense at all. It wasn't his place as a second to fight at all.
Kain129 chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
keep it coming
ak chapter 9 . 6/11/2014
bonne fic!
dommage que tu n'ai pas traité voldy dans la foulée; ça aura été un bon final!
silentprotector chapter 9 . 6/10/2014
Didn't know that was the end of the story, I always enjoyed it and thought you were going to continue it, I guess that was not originally clear, neat story either way.
TheMage22 chapter 9 . 6/9/2014
This is a great story.
Gracealma chapter 9 . 6/9/2014
Enjoyed your story. I do hope your family members are okay.
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA chapter 3 . 6/9/2014
you think that robst is a good writer? And bobmin? and kb0? they're pathetic, they always write the same thing.

if Harry would not put up with Hermione cheating on him in one story, not even when she is found innocent, that is how they have him act in every other story. you'd think they'd all be different, but they all share the same flaw.
missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 6/9/2014
A small criticism (not a flame): While a a brief disclaimer is understood, I really don't think it is necessary to repeat all of the details of the story challenge in every single chapter. Really, once is enough at the beginning of the story. Also, since the story is complete (according to the information), are the "recaps" even necessary? There are only nine chapters, and if all are as short as chapters 1-4, I think most people will read this story in one sitting, rendering recaps unnecessary. Just my observations ...

The story itself is quite interesting. I like those where Harry is helped by Hogwarts herself.
doubledamn chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
I liked the ending, a nice ambiguous and vague 'everything turned out fine...probably' ending. No one has any appreciation of subtlety anymore. Ignore everyone else and just be content with the fact that you did a good job and did it to your own standards. Well done.
NexusRider161 chapter 8 . 5/20/2014
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That was one lame ending.
Violensa chapter 8 . 5/17/2014
I found this to be a very intriguing concept for a story but as other people have mentioned this does not feel complete at all. There was no conclusion, or even a climax really. It has great potential though however I believe you are misleading the readers by labeling the story as complete. I personally would not have read the story if you had been honest and had said it had been discontinued. I feel like I have just wasted my time reading an incomplete story that will never reach a conclusion. I wish you the best of luck in your future writing endeavors though, I did enjoy what you did write I just do not appreciate the deceit, even if it was unintentional.
doubledamn chapter 8 . 5/14/2014
This is a fantastic story, I know it's classified as finished but I'm going to follow it anyway, just in case life decides to give a break to the people who deserve it most - Fanfic writers!
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