|Reviews for Fallen|
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 11 . 22h
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 9 . 22h
oh thats not good
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 8 . 22h
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 7 . 23h
very curious and i saw that coming with dawn
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 6 . 23h
nice healing joyce
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 5 . 23h
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 7/25
the serpents cool
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 7/25
nice chapter good interagation
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 2 . 7/25
| AzureSoulReaper chapter 1 . 7/25
| nghtlyreader chapter 11 . 7/25
Your Harry reminds me of Mr. Black from "Make a Wish". They seem to have the same kind of luck.
Which is completly awesome because I've been searching forever for a story written in the same style
I'm so happy that I clicked on your story.
| pbr7994 chapter 11 . 7/25
This was one of my favourite unfinished fics,
looking forward to seeing where out goes.
| davycrockett100 chapter 11 . 7/22
awesome job :)
| Difdi chapter 11 . 7/19
"Chromaton" makes no sense at all as an incantation to check time, since while chroma means color. If you meant time, then you what you want is chrona. But een that would be wrong, since the Wizard incantation to check time is Tempus.
| Difdi chapter 10 . 7/19
You may want to actually write a chapter, since non-story announcements violate the site rules.