Reviews for Clan Challenges and Oneshots
The Last Moongazer chapter 16 . 5/18/2013
Gah, I didn't realize how morbid this challenge was when I made it until now. XD But everyone always loves the morbid ones.
This was really good. I laughed a bit at Rowanflame's last-ditch attempt to keep Iceblade. x3
One thing: somewhere you called Ashstar Skystar. Not sure where it is, but you might want to fix that.
Keep writing!
-Moonstar of ImagineClan
leviastiel chapter 15 . 5/1/2013
Wow. This murder challenge was made for you! Beautiful writing!
xXRainDaze.NiilaXx chapter 15 . 4/30/2013
Hi Fire!
I like this, it's nice!
It is, however, very confusing. I would have liked to know his/her name...
I loved the last line of 'I was only surviving'. I also like how you tied in the scent of honey.
Nice, reminds me a little of Yew Claws.
Keep writing,
Goldenpetal chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, its meh, Minnowstar :D
I like I like I like I like I I need to emphasize more?
leviastiel chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
Wow... terrified...
nno nononono nono chapter 11 . 1/23/2013
o.o Twisted...odd...I like it but others will be creeped. Not that I wasn't. xD
Goldleaf chapter 13 . 1/20/2013
'Batting his abnormally long eyelashes and puckering his fat, puffy red lips.' All in all, I could TOTALLY picture Facekit with this description.
The Gone Angel chapter 12 . 1/10/2013
I think Fire is a she-cat.

nno nononono nono chapter 10 . 1/2/2013
I liked the part by me 8D
and the rest was good too. :3
- Jaypaw of SecretClan
The Gone Angel chapter 10 . 12/28/2012
XD OMG, The ending..."Very well, your Stardamned leadership." XD XD XD

The Gone Angel chapter 9 . 12/25/2012
XD Hilarious. I was laughing in my mind with a horrified expression,

The Gone Angel chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
He still died at the end, though. I found his terror funny.

The Gone Angel chapter 6 . 12/23/2012
This is a nice, twisted one-shot, Fire. I admire your writing.

The Gone Angel chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
XD I liked it because she died.

The Gone Angel chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
Hahaha! Bumblestripe died. :"D His stupidity made me laugh. XD

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