|Reviews for Swords of the Living Dead|
| whatanauthorsgottado chapter 10 . 23h
I just wanted to let you know that I've read this fic a number of times and loved it every time. I do wish it could be continued, but after all this time you've probably given up on it. Still, just wanted to let you know at least someone was enjoying this.
| Butterman274 chapter 10 . 7/8
What happened I like this story.
| zeps9001 chapter 10 . 4/15
I like how you mixed the worlds together and how you balanced them having modern day weapon in a medieval game. I liked the 25th boss fight.
I didn't like your prologue as you never got close to it and rereading it now, it makes even less sense. Kirito is a depressing loner, while Sinonon actually has group of friends. The story moves too slow at places, with 140k words I hoped it would've been mostly finished, not somewhere in the first half.
There too much overlap with canon. With so many changes, which basically makes this a completely different game, there is no way that the same exact events happen.
I will not favorite this. Mostly because you abandoned it early in the story and the zombies are just a cosmetic change.
| zeps9001 chapter 8 . 4/14
While this boss fight doesn't fit with SAO standards. I enjoyed this a lot.
But i'm confused by the ending, you made it sound like she killed him. Which is impossible as it is in a safe zone. But if it was just the bullet impact, how is that in any way a 'merciless goddess'?
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
Athena got lost Athena hello is someone save me Athena. heard a female voice hey Athena over here Athena saw Sinon want Athena fell off the ground Athena carry Sinon safety Athena saw a building Athena shut the door Athena ask Sinon hey Sinon are you okay Sinon ask. Athena hey Athena are we alone Said Sinon kiss on Athena's lips Athena kiss on Sinon's lips Sinon push Athena on bed hey Athena do you like me. so much said Sinon Athena said to si
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/8
First Yullier pushes for a reward for their 'selfless and accidental' intervention.
Sinon could have turned around like those players Kirito saved, but luckily for them she didn't.
And then is displeased when Sinon wants to enter negotiations about joining.
Really Yullier, make up your mind.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8
Athena got lost Athena hello is someone save me Athena. heard a female voice hey Athena over here Athena saw Sinon want Athena fell off the ground Athena carry Sinon safety Athena saw a building Athenashut the door Athena ask Sinon hey Sinon are you ok Sinon yeah i fine well are you. Sure Sinon Sinon pulled Athena closer Athena fall in Sinon's arm. Sinon fall in Athena's arm Sinon brush Athena's
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/7
little Athena got lost little Athena called for help. she bump right into girl hey watch it kid said Sinon. i'm sorry right bump into you said little Athena Sinon want little Athena hey little Athena yes Sinon can carry little Athena safety Sinon saw a house Sinon shit the door Sinon check little Athena Sinon told little Athena she and Sinon climb up the stair to little Athena's room Sinon climb up little Athena's bed uhh Sinon why put your breast on my arm Sinon ask little Athena hey little Athena do you like me l
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/3
i saw some one hand right onto my shoulder it was Sinon ohh Sinon is you hi Athena said Sinon and. i we are sister Sinon and. i love each. Other Sinon love me i. Love Sinon Athena know that Sinon is athena's half sister Athena heard a voice say help shout Sinon. bump onto Athena save me Sinon Athena Sinon grab Athena 's arm Athena carry Sinon
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
Sinon bump right into A girl with brown hair is Athena bump into Sinon yell at Athena hey watch it you loser. Sinon carry Athena safe Sinon put Athena said to Sinon. You save my life Sinon think you. uhh you. Welcome said Sinon hey Sister shout her arm warp around Athena throw her arm warp around Sinon pull Athena. Athena pulled Sinon close Sinon hug Athena hug Sinon love Athena love Sinon
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
i play gun gale online. i feel. someone is watch me i didn't notice follow me i think uhh hello is someone there i saw the blue hair sniper girl name Sinon saw me Sinon jump on me i yelled who are you. i said to Sinon Sinon. let out her Hand onto my Hand. Sinon hey kid are you okay said Sinon. i felt scare. Sinon hug me tight. i hug Sinon lay onto my bed Sinon said to me hi Athena hi Sinon hey Sinon do love me Sinon look at me Sinon put out her hand onto my hand i put out my Hand onto Sinon's hand Sinon lip onto my lip. Sinon put
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
Little Athena got lost the zombie chase little. for help. Little. Athena. Fall ouch said little Athena. Little. Athena had no idea. Umm hello someone there said little. Athena. Little Athena. Heard a female 's voice say umm hello is someone there little. Athena. Saw Sinon. Saw Little Athena hey kid are you lost. Said Sinon to little Athena uhh Sinon. why hold my hand said little Athena. hold hand with Sinon carry Little. Athena Sinon saw a building. Sinon climb up to little Athena's bedroom Sinon put little Athena Sinon close the door. Sinon climb up to Little Athena's bed Sinon pull little Athena close little Athena said to Sinon uhh to little Athena hey little Athena are you Alwake. Little Athena said to Sinon yeah I'm Alwake Sinon Hey little Athena can you unzip my white muffer uhh sure Sinon said little Athena. little Athena
| Ichangemynamesometimes chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
At one point, you mention the "4th floor," but isn't SLD split up into districts, not floors?
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/26/2016
Update soon plz T_T story is really nice it's been so long
| fuzzyidioms chapter 10 . 10/15/2016
I enjoyed your variant of the IP. I personally would love to see this story continued.