|Reviews for Along Came an Enigma|
| Bandit Enigmatic chapter 5 . 3/26/2013
I just want to say that this was the kind of story that I've been looking for. Punk and Jeff are my faves, so I can't wait to see where it goes.
Also, this reminds me of A Nightmare on Elm Street 3: Dream Warriors- and please take that as a complement. That's my favorite movie, and I was always intrested in the kids and their life from that movie more than Freddy K. So, this reminds me of the NOES 3 Kids life without the burden of a maniac named Freddy. It's right up my alley. Especially with Jeff not being able to really talk until he needed to reminds me of Joey from that movie who basically did the same thing.
So that being said, it filled what I was looking for so long in a story. I know it's not a NOES fic, but the feel inspires me to reboot some of mine,
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update!
I really am curious to learn more about Punk and Jeff's past!
I hope it's updated soon! :)
Keep up the great work!
| TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
I completely understand what you're going through!
I often have that same problem when writing, so it's completely understandable.
Just write to the best of your ability when you can, don't force it (trust me, forcing it only gets more frustrating.)
I absolutely loved this chapter and it was worth the wait!
Jeff spoke! Even though it was temporary and only a few words . . . it was amazing and perfect!
I can't wait to read more! :)
| SparksFlyOut chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
(I'm too lazy to sign in XD)
Just wanted to say that I'm still with you, and believe me, I know how you feel. Transferring what's in my head onto paper seems like a friggin' impossible task, and every time I start writing, I'm like "well fuck, this isn't gonna work". So no judgment from this direction.
Nonetheless... I love Junk to bits.
| MissBrianna chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
omg jeff finally talked, that made me shed a tear :'( im happy he reached punk out of that state. that was a great moment. Update soon!
| vampqueen440 chapter 5 . 3/24/2013
Thank gofd u updated...jeez...lol...jk
| undertaker1465 chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
I really liked this chapter and that Jeff spoke :-)
| TayTay4936 chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
I was so excited to see this updated! Amazing chapter...absolutely loved it!
You can already see how much Jeff cares for Phil already...even if he doesn't fully realize why yet.
And everything with Kofi and Sheamus was adorable! I'm really loving those two together now. And how Sheamus could tell what Jeff was trying to say without Jeff having to speak? Both funny and awesome.
And Jeff finally spoke! Wow! I'm glad Phil was able to actually hear him. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so curious about their backgrounds, Jeff's especially since his seems really really vague at this point. Amazing job as always!
| Xenarocks99 chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
Yah an update! Glad you didn't abandon this story cause I love it! I love the connection between Jeff and Punk...and Sheamus and Kofi are just too cute. Awesome chapter, update soon!
| MissBrianna chapter 4 . 3/5/2013
this such a great story, please continue!
| Xenarocks99 chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
Loved this chapter. I liked how Sheamus would blush whenever he mentioned Kofi that was cute. Its upsetting to read what happened to Phil by his own father. Hope Jeff can take care of him. Awesome chapter, update soon!
| TheGirlInThePinkScarf chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
I am so glad that you updated this!
I loved this chapter so much!
I feel so bad for Punk, but Jeff being there for him is so sweet and wonderful!
I can't wait to read more, keep up the good work! :)
| TayTay4936 chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
You have no idea how excited I was to see this updated...and you did not disappoint!
Wow! This chapter was amazing! I love how you're building the relationships between Jeff and Phil and Sheamus and Kofi.
When it said there was giggling, I just had a feeling it was Kofi and Jeff. What better way to begin to bring Phil and Jeff together than through Phil's best friend who he always worries about?
I love that Phil feels unguarded and exposed when he's around Jeff. That'll help him start being himself. :)
And Phil's past...wow that was heartbreaking. But so well-written though. Why he is the way he is is starting to make sense.
And I knew it would be Jeff in the room with him. Love it!
Really an amazing chapter. I'm so excited to see this story develop!
| vampqueen440 chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
Looking forward to an update
| undertaker1465 chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
I like how Jeff and Punk are so different, they're similar. Please update soon : D
| TayTay4936 chapter 3 . 1/16/2013
Haha for a "filler chapter" this was ah-maze-ing! :)
I love the connection between Phil and Jeff already! The fact that he already knew how to sign was perfect! I love that when Punk was ranting and getting all pissed, Jeff just smiled. They're gonna be amazing together. 3
I'm interested to see what else you have to reveal...about both their pasts. Should be very very interesting!
And I'm not usually a fan of Sheamus, but I love how you've written him here and definitely think you should go with the idea of him with Kofi! It's perfect. Plus, it could eventually kinda show Phil that he didn't have to be the one to look after Kofi anymore.
Great work and can't wait for an update!