Reviews for Bottom
Mislav chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
So hot and cute. I can see their roles being set up that way. I especially liked a slow build up to a climax. My favorite part was: "He could finally feel her teeth graze his skin on his shoulder, feel his blood continue to rush to his growing erection. The bite was soft first, a nibble, playful. Then, she got into the meat, and he swore he almost felt skin break, slightly hoping it would. Joan's nose caressed his new bruise lovingly.

"Don't beg.""
PeterHaleIsForeverTheAlpha chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Um, something is really wrong with you fic. I can't read it at all. It has weird code and stuff. Do you think you could fix it?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Why would you post this?
myst77 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
This is what it looked like to me:
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I am viewing the page on Nokia Lumia 520. Please fix this.
nhrc chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Wow. I salute you!
dadby chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Just a quickie? ;) Alrighty then...thanks for sharing a passionate one shot that's awesome!
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Really hot!
Jen4850 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Very well done
mmkbrook chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Wow, Joan. Didn't think you would be the aggressor in a relationship with Sherlock.