Reviews for You and Me
maggiegurle chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
Great little story! Thanks! :o)~
blueeyedcherry chapter 2 . 6/9/2015
Yes. This is perfect. :)

They're so good together. They just mesh well. And I love that Alice knows and is clearly upset by it. Because she deserves it like no other for the craptastic behavior she pulled. And the birth mark stuff ... What a low thing to even bring up and use as ammunition.

And I think it's funny that Jasper and Alice keep hooking up and then breaking up. No happiness for her.

blueeyedcherry chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
What a crappy thing for Alice to do! Some "best friend" she is.

I hope Bella gets to know Edward and he's wonderful and amazing and all the things that Alice doesn't deserve to have.
SarcasticBimbo chapter 4 . 6/8/2015
Great story. Loved it. Thanks for sharing your talent. :-)
OhGeeFantasy chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
I love this! I need more so I'm reading on.
aniseed flower chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
Ack! Loved it! Thanks so much for writing. :o)
twiloves chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
Omg ! Amazing perfectly written as if it's a journal for each one to read ! Silly love all consuming love you nailed it xxx brilliant.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination
fatpotatoe chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Wow it's good. You've not only made a twist. You've made a double twist.
Saint Genevieve chapter 4 . 2/2/2015
So sweet, love it, thx
regina423 chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
I love this story so much.
trs1 chapter 4 . 12/21/2014
You ended this story perfectly! I am happy that Alice and Edward were able to make peace with each other. It left a smile on my face that Alice and Bella were able to repair their relationship and remain friends. Edward's proposal made my heart melt.

I am so glad that I found this story, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thanks for writing.
trs1 chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
Great job with the first time lemon. I hate when it's unrealistically done but you got it just right!
trs1 chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
Enjoying the progression between these two! I admit to being surprised that Alice would have the nerve to bully Bella when she was the one that ruined the friendship. And Jasper is disgusting flirting with Bella in front of Edward. He and Alice deserve each other.
trs1 chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
You did such a great job on this chapter. As I was reading I felt so many emotions; anger at Alice's betrayal, Sadness over Bella's heartbreak, Confusion over Edward's rejection of Alice, Confusion and Incredulity over Alice's decision to sleep with Jasper to retaliate against Bella, and hope at the way the story ended. I think Bella made the right decision to end her friendship with Alice. You captured my interest from the very beginning of the story. I love your writing style!
dazzled eyes22 chapter 4 . 12/20/2014
Thanks for this story. I'm sorry, but I just can't chalk up Alice's behavior to a perception bias on Edward's part. She said some harsh things and interrupted their stay-cation knowing full well they had plans. I'm glad Edward and Bella got their happily ever after despite Alice's earlier attempts to undermine their relationship.
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