Reviews for You and Me
girlygirl0706 chapter 4 . 11/13/2013
Ms. Swanbookstore recommended this. Glad I found this story. Loved how they fell in love.
sfspeedy chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
This was perfectly delightful! Thank you!
Twi-teacher chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
Wow! Happened upon this and I am so glad I did. Great story! Thanks!
Lulabell75 chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
Loved it!

denninelli chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Definitely interesting. So high school girl think.
SueBee0619 chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
This was just lovely and wonderful and made me sigh happily while eating my lunch. I'd probably be like Edward in this case and he's a better person than I am. I don't know if I'd be able to let go of the hurt Alice caused as well as he did. Maybe I need to work on that. :)

TwiCarrie chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
I am so glad one of my favorite author rec'd your story this morning. This was an amazing read. Thank you for sharing it with us all. I will be sure to check out more of your stories :) You are a talented writer and I loved this amazing story even if I hated Alice a few times you made sure I loved her by the end. And Edward was so swoon worthy, just thank you.

slc6548 chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
This was so refreshing - short and sweet and full of love.
katmom chapter 4 . 11/12/2013
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. It was charming!

It's now in my Completed Community, and I thank nkubie for telling me about this story!

NKubie chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
Beautiful and perfect! And while I'm not sure I completely trusted Alice by the end, I don't completely distrust her either. Regardless, they all found a way to make it work. And perhaps we were all just seeing Alice through Edward's eyes and not the friend she was being to Bella.

For whatever reason it didn't click with me that Edward held off college for a year so he and Bella could attend together. I guess I forgot he was a year ahead of her. Anyway, what a great way for them to build their life together.

The proposal was perfect and exactly how it should be, as was the acceptance.

Thank you so much for sharing your gift of words with us! I look forward to more!

Nan (Not short for Nana either. LOL)

P.S. I hate bananas too, btw. I knew I loved Edward even more. :)
akjamma chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
I loved this!
NKubie chapter 3 . 11/11/2013
It took me a while but I only just realize that Edward calls her Bella, no one else. I like that!

If Bella can start to forgive Alice, I guess I can too. Actually, no, I don't think I have to. But I do pity Alice, if that's any consolation.

This first time was perfect! Far more perfect than mine, that's for sure.
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
This chapter was the best one yet. Thank you. I really enjoyed this story. Very much.
Robward17 chapter 4 . 11/11/2013
Awww...what a sweet story. Even though I wanted to pussypunch Alice Numerous times, I love how her jealousy brought E/B together.
NKubie chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
I was almost willing to sort of forgive Alice for what she did in her drunken stupidity, but what she's doing to Bella is hurtful and mean. So no, no forgiving. Alice is just a bitch! How could Bella not have seen that before? Though I had a friendship for years and years and it became toxic after more than 20. So I guess I understand that too.

Thank you for adding to this. So worth it! I felt so bad for Edward's continued insecurity about Bella's feelings for him, but I adored the ILYs! And I also loved how you treated Bella's insecurity about her birthmark and the way that Edward helped her overcome that. They really are so good for each other.
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