Reviews for You and Me
luvyateamedward chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Great story and writing!
RandyWriter chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
Amazing story! Loved it! So sweet to watch the development of Bella and Edward's story! Never get how a girl can ALMOST steal away a boy that you really like. Even drunk. Makes no sense. I think there was a bit of that "well if I'm not happy, neither are you" in too many females out there. Glad it wasn't my problem but I knew too many to suffer that wrath. Great job showing it all. Alice's mother, wow! Explains a lot! Jaz, yeah scummy! Glad Alice found Garrett! Grandma giving up that ring, just to spark the thought, wow! You go Grandma! "Obviously" a great story with a fantastic ending!
Scorpio11 chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
What a lovely story, full of real life and not just the shiny, wonderful parts, although there were plenty of those too, obviously.
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
I love these two. Ican read them forever :)
Guest chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
I loved this. It's so true to life. All kinds of relationships are difficult, especially when you are young and growing up. I'm glad Bella and Alice could put all the hurt behind them. And I loved your version of Edward. So good.
nix69 chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
Thankyou for a wonderful story!
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
I loved it! Couldn't tear myself away from it! Love this Edward and Bella too!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
Thanks for writing more. Love them. Love him. There were no boys like that at my HS!
DreamerRoad chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
That was really good... :)
DreamerRoad chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
Thanks for the insight into Alice...

And, for the rest... :)
DreamerRoad chapter 2 . 11/23/2013
Ahhhhh... an Edward totally worth rooting for. Great chapter.
DreamerRoad chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
I saw this on TLS and then noticed it was a 4 chapter fic - exactly what I was looking to read. But, I gotta say, you really hooked me in from the first few words. I couldn't decide if I was on Bella's side or not, if she was rushing to judgment, a bit angry that she wouldn't stop Alice for making a stupid drunk mistake...

Very good...
my2galspal chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
That was fantastic! I loved every word. Obviously. Thanks for sharing it with us and I look forward to reading more of your work.
IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 4 . 11/18/2013
Great job! Loved every minute of it!
MamaJoyof3 chapter 4 . 11/17/2013
Oh Shell, this was a beautiful story! Loved it so much.
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