|Reviews for Desire|
| Brona chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
This is really good! I really loved it, my favourite freeverse ever!
| Zivahdavid chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
| Little Redwood chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This was amazing. I've never written a free verse, and I think I've read half of one before this. I really love it. The way you use different quotations, asterisks and upside down words. It was perfect.