Reviews for Grasping Darkness, Hungry Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So will we get to read the story about the other Cullen transformations or are we just assuming a happy ending for all? Loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm actually kind of glad that Bella's not pregnant right now. It's gives them more time to focus on being a couple. It gives Bella a chance to experience more things before having the responsibility and lifelong commitment of motherhood. It also gives Edward the chance to grow more accustomed to his new existence, and body and for the first time in a century, actually being a full and active participant in the human world around d him. It also gives Charlie a chance to adjust and get used to them as a couple. Thank you for the story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I initially was afraid Edward's body was aging fast, or that he was physiologically presenting as a hundred year old man would. It seems mostly neurological, and maybe also joint pain due to growth? I hope Jessica is actually the next to make the change back to human. She's really struggling, plus her family will soon want to see her. If she disappears on them for too long, they'll want to question Bella. Jake is really being a stand-up guy. He has every right to be bitter and resentful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "What sort of pain is it?" "The painful kind." That may be my favorite line so far. Edward's quite witty. Actually there's been consistently fun humor throughout this and GD. I like it because it doesn't come across forced or over the top. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward's first pee-pee, lol. The visual of his proud family lined up just outside the bathroom, excitedly cheering and teasing him was great. Like potty training a toddler. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed GD and looking forward to this sequel. Edward's first experience blushing was fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this soooo much |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Thanks for the extended 9 chapters of this story! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. Wow. I haven’t reviewed before, because based on the dates I guess you’re long gone from this site and hopefully having a lot of fun writing original fics instead. But thanks. That was a fun, incredibly erotic, ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Subplot please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want the subplot! You’re amazing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Will you ever update. I've been patiently waiting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |