I've been following this story since it started and I finally had the pleasure of continuing since I revisited your page. You as an author are amazing, and I'm satisfied where you left this ending at. I wouldn't be mad at a few more chapters though... Like really, not mad at all. Honestly. Dear god, just one more please.

ok, it wasn't that bad...just kidding - you are awesome writer, thank you 3

At first, I wasn't so hot on the idea of Bella staying human and even less so for Edward to be human. I think it messed with the whole concept of "together forever." But the hybrid angle proved interesting and I'm glad our favorite couple have another possible forever and are still super human and equals. Awesome read. Hope you do more!

I can't even begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed the saga of Windoward and his fragile, then not so fragile, Bella. GREAT story. I loved the reanimation aspect of it. SO original and I know I've never read another where Edward returns to being human after being a vampire. FANTASTIC!

This and the ma in storu were really good. I fon all of the characters and plot twists really interesting. I loved Carlisle and how scientific he was! And the ending, with Carlisle curING vampirism, amazing! Something I've never read before. If I have one thing I wish I wanted it would be to see how everyone else's change back to human was, how emmetts sex with human rose was, if rose ever got her baby... how alice and jasper turned, and obviously to see how Carlisle and esme were leading as humans... also, did bella and Edward have kids? Did Jessica get turned back and end up with jake? I have so many questionquestion! I want more!

Loved it! I so wish there was more to this! There are so many directions to take this, but I understand.

Would kill for more darkward. Do you accept bribes?

I am so sad! However, I understand that you have to get on to your real life writing career. You are amazingly talented and so intelligent. What with Carlisle's experiments, the unusual plot, the magical way they thought and spoke about each other. I could see how you could have gone on and on with everyone being changed to human, probably another 300,000 words at least! Plus children, etc. I know I would have read every bit of it! So yeah I am sad. But I am sick & stuck in bed for quite awhile, and your words have made me so happy. I just want you to know how grateful I am to you for helping me escape with their undying love, earth shattering passion and joyous happiness. You are the BEST! God Bless...Anita

You are such an amazing writer Kiya! This chapter has me laughing so hard! I can't believe Esme cock-blocked them! I mean she knows how it feels to be mated, how could she do that? :) I think I might like this sequel better than part one.

I just love Edward and Carlisle's interactions so funny! Especially the orgasm of all orgasms. Poor Edward, It's bad enough he has to give Carlisle samples of everything that comes out of him, but the sperm too. Oh Edward! I hope he gets it good tonight.

Oh no, Charlie is with her! Oh Edward is going to explode! I guess Charlie wants to meet the family hehe. Poor Bella and Edward!

Edward is hysterical now, I just love him now, but I also loved the fierce, horny, and bloodlust Edward, very much!

Poor Edward! He can't help that his peen hurts too much to use. Maybe when Bella gets back he can poop and use his peen too! Poor Bella! Poo Bella hehe!

I'm so glad that Edward seems to be almost guilt free now. He is sweet. I just wish his peen would get in working order for both of them! Poor Edward I guess it's never gonna be easy for him. At least he is much happier now.

I really enjoyed this story and I understand your desire to stop there you could keep the story going and explore all the transformations of the family

I really hope that you will be able to finish this story, I have laughed through most of it. It has been a pleasure to read.