Reviews for Born from hate
R chapter 14 . 5/14
i wish you finish this fic not on fucking ciff hanger!
Soooooo chapter 4 . 1/12
not hating or anything but i dislike it when people make the kyuubi a girl because it seems like a default thing now in days
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 5 . 10/15/2015
Shut up you Guest asshole.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2015
your story is a peace of trash ,fuck you and your writing cause even the biggest retarded brain dead fuck would resent everyone after experiencing what you've explained and even some of the world's most famous cannibalistic serial killers ended up that way for thing more lenient than what you've explained . Furthermore fuck your story I really hated it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
in what universe does one have his eye gouged out and forgive the people for causing such pain! you must be the dumbest fuck in the world.
CosmicBeing chapter 4 . 5/18/2015
I swear to God one day you pathetic little Kishimoto lovers are going to get one HELL of an ass whooping, you pieces of garbage!
CosmicBeing chapter 3 . 4/10/2015
Shove your ramen up your ass along with your fanatic sensation for that dumbass Kishimoto.
CosmicBeing chapter 2 . 3/24/2015
Fuck off and die horribly you Kishimoto loving piece of filth.
ulquiola chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
i shall stop.

rather illogical. i cannot continue.

i mean why would the council issue missions without tsunade's consent? only tsunade gets to sign in mission and if the council has the ability to do so lets say the rest of K11 (sans sakura), why would tsuande call them for their actions?
ulquiola chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
hey there. i read and got intrigued with your story. nice plot base but that is all i can say.

heres my critique...

1. sentences are too long. it is like you want to kill the reader because the lack of pausing which i am doing right now wherein you really have to use punctuation marks like commas and other things so that the reader can seriously breathe. solution? use commas, dashes, semicolons, colons or etc. or just separate the long-ass sentences into two or three.

2. why was he beaten up? i mean whats the point of the sudden hatred? you didnt specify if those two prisoners have mental probs or where from konoha who hated him.

3. kusagakure is landlocked- surrounded by 4 countries. let us say it has a lake, it would not take 3 days as the lake would have to not be that big.

4. teuchi and ayame. what is with their reactions? you think it is possible to keep a facade for like 5 to six years? theres no reasoning stated like they werei n a genjutsu or etc.

5. some of the konoha 11's reactions. okay some would probably be hateful to him others would probably be concerned. hinata firstly... why did she cheered? even if its her enemy i do not think her personality is capable of that scorn. plus she freakin loves the blond? secondly, shikamaru. he's lazy but inquisitive, he should question not downright "cheer". that would even be a chore for him! chouji is just too nice, so out of character. and then shino... he. does. not. cheer. at. all!

- its like you focused too much on naruto's anguish yet you hurried things up. please consider these points. hope you improve.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Can't I just have one story where naruto is sent there but isn't raped. Like Jesus fucking Christ I didn't need to hear that!
FoxyDeath chapter 14 . 7/18/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
please continue to 's June right now in the person adopted your story has not even started. I'm serious check it out please continue the story
Majin-kun chapter 10 . 4/19/2014
Damn that cliffhanger...
I can't stress how completely stupid Kiba is in's just amazing.
I imagine something about his reason for being locked up four years went wrong...Didn't imagine Tsunade could be such a coward in this. She really made it worst; and was a given that in a moment of spite and hatred one of the council's member would've revealed it to him.
Majin-kun chapter 8 . 4/19/2014
NaruAnko...Happiness! Pretty random but I'll take it...I know that when Anko wants something she get's it!...most of the time.
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