Reviews for Missing Pieces
meepison chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
So sad, but I have hope that the time for Edward and Bella will come. She is wise beyond her years. Beautiful.
motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
beautiful...so sad...Bella has a lot of wisdom for someone so young...to be so alone, and there are so many people in this world who are...
ReluctantRomantic chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
So exquisitely heartbreaking. Please continue this!
enka3 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
A sad but great story! Loved it!
AzraCullen chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
my god, this is so sad...
Totally crying my eyes out...I know what it feels like to feel alone.
Please write more...give them a HEA we hardly ever see in life
jansails chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Wow!
Amazing story.
Bella grew up, recognized pain, recognized the prison of guilt, of sorrow in Edward's own mind & heart was reinforced by his parents' anger & loss as well.
Bella's last line, what a beautiful soul to impart such truth, such love to Edward.
jansails/jan2
PS:
This one made me cry.
Vancouver-Canuck-Girl chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Damn this was heart breaking. I want Edward to be okay, to have Bella heal him, some how. Your words are as lovely as you are xo
2muchtrouble chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Heartbreaking.
radioactive77 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Beautiful!
goldenstorm21 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Heartbreaking and gut wrenching. I'd love to read more and see where all this goes. Have you considered continuing it?
Rochelle Allison chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
so
much
love
laylak500 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I loved it. I hope their time comes soon.
mysinger chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Wow! Great story. I always enjoy your writing. Your characters are so real, their pain and their joys. Any chance of a sequel? :)
Pyejammies chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
What a sad tale beautifully told. Thank you.
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