|Reviews for Spectre From The Past|
| Psychozzy chapter 1 . 1/14/2003
Hope you don't mind a little constructive criticism, but have you ever heard of commas? Sorry, that was mean, but have you ever read the Dead Zone by Stephen King? It talks a lot about comas and how if you are in a come that long what would happen to your body. It says that if you were in a coma that long, not only would it be rare that you would come out of it, but that your body would slowly digress to its fetal stage. Of course, you most likely didn't know this, but now you do. Anyways, interesting concept.
| O2 chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
too cute, and a great idea.
| Talia Ali chapter 1 . 11/10/2002
Yay! Fantastic job on this story. I *really* liked it. If you feel inspired enough, you should write another chapter about how Molly feels about Max regularly risking his life. Just a thought! Keep up the great work.