Reviews for love at first sight
Guest chapter 10 . 8/25
UPDATEEE
Aya chapter 10 . 8/23
Woah, I saved your story in my favorites and I just noticed that you updated in july hehehe (no, no I'm not complaining because I understand that you've been busy) and I really can't get your story out of my head. For once, I'm enjoying Sasuke being the one in comflict and not Sakura... Also, reading from his perspective is very refreshing. Normally other writers describe their fics from Sakura's pov (I'm not complaining about that either) and it's great but there aren't enough good written fics from Sasuke's perspective... I also like how you describe his conflict. He's inlove with her and sadly, he can't do anything about it because of the age gap... I also like that you are taking your time with them. I mean, there are so many fanfics that make the hook up in the second or third chapter...And sometimes they're hard to believe or so OOC that I kinda lose interest.

But look at me! hooked up with your story and enjoying it. I adore how you describe Sakura from Sasuke's perspective... Like, he appreciates how beautiful she is inside-out. I hope everything in your life is going better and thanks for this wonderful story!
another.creative.lover chapter 10 . 8/25
It's becoming very Lolita indeed, what with the idolization of the younger girl. Sasuke is beyond obsessed and this is starting to take on Vladimir Nobokov voice... It's almost scary.

Ooh, Suna U? Oto General Hospital? I'm definitely thinking they separate for a bit before they reunite and Sakura brings home a young man, realizes that she loves sasuke and sasuke finally shits out that dead thing in his ass.
another.creative.lover chapter 9 . 8/25
Oh man, mirroring sasuke leaving konoha in the canon series... Oto would definitely sound good for a few years or so apart so that Sakura can age just enough for their relationship not to be creepy, but sasuke would be taking the risk that Sakura will get with someone else...

Ohh man, he's a sensei now. Fuck. Sasuke, you are pitied.
another.creative.lover chapter 8 . 8/25
THERE YA GO SAUCE EMBRACE THE FEELS
Also ooh, awkward moment where I feel awkward about Naruto setting up Sasuke with Ino...
another.creative.lover chapter 7 . 8/25
I must say, your writing style is exquisitely poetic... It carries a lot of feeling with it and its quite perfect for angst fics.
Sasuke, as a mental health professional, should know that his obsession with Sakura is getting out of hand. I'm glad he went to see his mother and started to connect again. Good for him!
another.creative.lover chapter 6 . 8/25
Ooh. Another potential love interest has arrived at the scene and he's also an older man... Oh, Neji...
I wonder though if it's going to be a primary part of the story. There seems to be a lot of Sasuke going back and forth in his own mind about Sakura and driving himself crazy...
another.creative.lover chapter 5 . 8/25
I audibly, sharply, inhaled when hinata mentioned sakura like I was just whoaoaoaoaa girl come in now.
Sasuke denying her existence hurt. A lot. Confused jerk.

Also, Naruto is the broest of bros. I just hope he'll be understanding when sasuke comes clean...
another.creative.lover chapter 4 . 8/25
Oh, okay.
Um.
Sasuke why? Q AQ THIS BURNS USSSS
Also oh god, Naruto's perspective of Sakura is so... normal. Which I get is purposeful and meant to be objective but damn the fact that she doesn't even look older than sixteen and he's catching on to Sasuke... Like WOW
another.creative.lover chapter 3 . 8/25
Ahhh, SAKURA you cutie pi kind of gushed at the fact that Sakura was doing pediatric neurooncology, or at least, something to do with pediatrics and oncology, because my brother is on his way to doing that kind of stuff so it made Sakura even more likeable to me on a personal level.

Poor Sasuke, so old and in love... 28 isn't that old though, but from a teenagers perspective, its quite a ways off.

Also, I wonder why sasuke's friends don't notice Sakura at first glance... at first I thought she was a ghost and it would be something like a Korean drama but Suigetsu sees her so that wasn't it. Maybe she's just plain and small in others' eyes...?
another.creative.lover chapter 2 . 8/25
Oh gosh the angst is so real...
I'm wondering though if we're going to see Sakura's pov at some point to see how she feels as a young girl about all this, or if she's kind of oblivious to SASUKE'S feelings. She must have some sort of senpai-crush.
another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 8/25
Ohhh man, am I a sucker for forbidden love... Especially between a much older man and a younger woman.
The tricky thing with this is that Sakura may not even have him on her radar because of how much older he is than her so he'll have to tread lightly and be a bit cautious around her else she'd kind of be squicked out by him.
I can't wait to see how this unfolds...
Tracy chapter 10 . 8/17
Please please please update this! I love this story so much! You are a very talented writer and I just love how descriptive you are! This story is amazing and so are your other ones but this one is by far my favorite! So please update it. Thank you! :)
sausaku chapter 10 . 8/11
oooo itachi is coming next chapter hopefully? nice
sfha chapter 9 . 8/11
yay you finally updated
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