Reviews for Advanced Wishes: Black or White
Phoenix chapter 54 . 7/27
*A chibi shiny Dilaga come up to the laptop and sits here typing*Hell my name is Diamond and I want to say is I love this story and I think it's very good, oh and just mention I'm Phoenix's baby sister and I love that he mentions daddy sometimes in his chat oh and to you mr man that has daddy in that evil master ball parade take of daddy and bring him back pwease
Love Diamond
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26
I also noticed another thing yet
'May's Pokédex was white while Ash's was black'
Those this mean May will have Reshiram and Ash will have Zekrom as their Pokémon?
Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/26
Me, my dad (Dialga), and Arceus just thought about somethings.
What would happen if Manaphy just randomly showed and saw Victini calling Ash and May 'papa' and 'mama'?
Would he be upset about the fact that his mother is taking care of another baby Pokémon or would he probably question why they have a baby Victini and maybe accept him/her as a sibling or something.
But other than that very nice and awesome story
a huge fan chapter 54 . 7/20
dude finish this pleeeeease! I love this story!
ChloboShoka chapter 54 . 7/13
I've heard lots of great things about your work, and I think they are very well justified. Even though the ideas are cheesy, they are brilliantly executed and unpredictable which makes it more enjoying.
Pokemon fan chapter 2 . 5/18
I really like this story there alot I like about it I'm a big fan of advance shipping please continue this story I'm really interested in what happens in the other chapters and I like one heart and one love story which was the one before u made this one and I really enjoyed it to its been 2years since u updated this story can u please update it soon I want to see the rest of it and u did a wonderful job on one heart one love story and this one
boomingmaster chapter 54 . 2/5
Je, busy, man, (or woman) this story wasn't updated in 2 years, please continue, but if you have a reason for not update I understand but I don't like it , good luck in your life
Love Actions chapter 54 . 12/4/2015
You story is amazing and interesting. I'm during to know what happens next, please write more it been like a year, please I'm looking forward to reading if you do
Daanh chapter 54 . 11/6/2015
This series belongs to one of the best on this site. I really hope you will continue this anytime soon! It's been quite a while.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2015
I thought anyone rewriting pokemon black or white did so because the anime made Ash out to be a dumb-tard. If you're going to keep him like that, what's the point of this idiotic fic?
Guest chapter 21 . 9/21/2015
Why you dont use the ash's aura power decendent of sir aoron?and why u dnt use ash's some old ur story looks like a chaos nothing else.
haruharukaspring chapter 54 . 9/13/2015
I love this story! This story is amanzing and awesome!O I love Advanceshipping! Can you continue? Please!
Guest chapter 54 . 9/7/2015
Y did u discontinue? I loved this story D:
Guest chapter 54 . 7/28/2015
Y are more not updated, no chapter 55. It is not fair to the people
Who want to keep reading this
MalevolentDarkness16 chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
I like how the story is starting, but did you really have to make Ash lose against Trip, even if it was canon? Without electric type attacks, an Iron Tail is good enough to destroy that Snivy
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