|Reviews for Hot and Cold|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Something so cringe-worthy about teen porn, not to mention OOC for Lily. Ugh.
| Mug chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Lol, RidingonRumbleroar. I was more concerned about moaning myrtle because she said she sometimes goes into the Great Lake.
That was very tasteful. Very good.
| hocrux chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
you should write more like it it satisfys me
| sadf chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
this is a good idea for a smut. skinny dipping in the great lake is not an idea heard too often! ;)
| may-bell-rose chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
That was hot ;) might have to try it out... But in a clean pool ;)
| Apples and Beckett chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Hehe I like the last line
| RidingonRumbleroar'sback chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Is it sad that the only thing I could think was this?: Oh My Rowling. What if the giant squid was watching them? What if he heard Lily when she said she'd rather go out with the giant squid than James? What if he thought he had a had a chance to finally having a relationship with a beautiful girl? And then he sees this happening in HIS pond. I would hate to be him. Poor squid.
| thestoicwarrior chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
aww, I love ljsmut. awesome oneshot. though I did think it was a bit unrealistic with them coming at the same time. awesome job, still.
| Jess the Enthusiast chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Fantastic oneshot! :D
| anavihs chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Wowza. O_O That was... AWESOME! :D
Yeah, seriously, James, when a girl offers you to shag, you GO! ;)
Lots of love
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Wow! I can't believe I have never read a JL skinny dipping in the lake fic before!
And yours was an awesome one to fill that void, lol!
I literally just threw a little dance party when I got all the emails in my inbox saying you had been writing. AAAAAAAAAAAAA! So excited!
This was great, although I do wish you'd made it summer. I am feeling quite chilly now! Despite the content being hot.
Sooo happy to have writing from you you absolute star! xxxx
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Just had to pop in and say I'm SO glad you posted this here!