Reviews for Take Her For A Spin
Fi Suki Saki chapter 12 . 6/1/2013
This is so... Awwwww...!

The moment with Thor unexpected Increadible ADORABLE! So so Sweet! Amazingly Lovely! God! So Awesome!

The moment with Steve was intense and quite awkward... But I'm glad that's ended well... huff... *sighed of relief*


America's Justice system is close to Perfect! My country's(Indonesia's) justice system close to be called Horrible! #No offence
Though actually not all crime can be solved by what so-called 'Justice'... (I learn It from watching)


To be honest, I HATES almost all story with Body-swap type! Close to Despise It!
But when I want to read this, this was what I think; "Hey, It sound like a good fic! The summary sound interesting! And it's not Romance fic! And there's no hesitation to read this fic from my mind. After all, I already this author's others fic, so, why not?!" ;D
And true... No Complint, no hesitation, just no bad thing happen to me! More praising happens in my mind for this fic!

The Hurt - heart-breaking moment covered with Comfort. And the Comfort part was so Heart-warming and so Fluffy! *squealing* This is AWESOME!


I' personally think, between Bruce and Tony in this fic, they're better not dating. No offence! I also think between them was indeed sweet and adorable! But this fic, Tony just had hard moment, so dating is not best opinion. Especially when he was in teenage female body, he was in 'panic' and 'confusion'. (I'm confused how to express It with words, especially in english!)



You closed this chapter with great scene!

I just hope, when it's close to last chapter, it's end well - Amazing - like your others fic! :) *peace*
basket1544 chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
Oh no. I saw there were 12 chapters and thought I was only on chapter 10. More please quickly! Love your style. I'll go back and review each chapter but I didn't want to interrupt the flow of words on the page. Great job! I think at one point you call Clint by a different name, I will try to find that chapter. Do you mind the criticism?
KeitorinNara chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
I admit I was hesitant at first in reading this. I find too many stories that throw in an OC and suddenly the story became OC & company, instead of focusing on the true characters. You managed to pull off the opposite. You also wrote Thor well. So many people write him as an uneducated brute, and that always breaks my heart. I enjoy this story, and can't wait for the next update!
Blaithin chapter 9 . 4/29/2013
Cool idea, your writing is solid and the plot great. I'm glad you didn't rush to bringing back Tony into the story, it meant the tension was able to rise steadily, and there are some moments of brilliant comedy at the start.

There is, however, one point that been nagging at me while I've been reading. I haven't finished the fic so I don't know if it will change, but so far everyone is excessively unsympathetic and harsh to Cassie.

Cassie has lived through years of physical and sexual abuse, the law enforcement which is meant to protect her has proven it doesn't care. She has stated she'd rather die than go back to the abuse she has previously endured. Sure what she did was wrong, but she's come from such an awful place that her motivation seems pretty straightforward and logical.

You've captured the anger and frustration the avengers feel towards Cassie very well but none of them seem to have the a single sympathetic thought towards her. Instead she is positively vilified by the avengers, despite knowing her homelife they haven't empathised with her and can't seem to understand her motivation. This is a little odd when juxtaposed with how affected they at Tony's rape and abuse - a rape and abuse they refuse to acknowledge when taking Cassie's actions into account.

Anyway sorry to critque so much. I really do like this fic, in fact I like all your fics and have been mainlining them all afternoon. I hope your not offended and I look forward to continuing to read your work.
nessa11997 chapter 12 . 4/19/2013
thanks for the history
ORgasmicPigeon chapter 12 . 4/7/2013
So cuteee! :D
DepthsOfCreation chapter 12 . 4/4/2013
Awe i loved this chap so much! The best yet! Update soon!:)
mwc288 chapter 12 . 4/2/2013
it may be exhausting, but you write thor very well. i think you should do it some more. it will cause you to grow as a writer. really. :) more please?
kogouma chapter 12 . 3/30/2013
Thor is the best. i love Thor, he's such a sweetheart. great chapter, i loved it and update soon! :D
eileenKelli chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
That was an awesome chapter. Very few things make me happier then a well written Thor.
Ppleater chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
Awwwhhhhhh sad but cute.
VampireApple chapter 12 . 3/29/2013
I love this chapter. You write Steve and Tony so well, you got their friction and Steve's kindness and Tony's... everything. What I really think shines is the second half, with Thor. I love goofy Thor, but a serious Thor is so much better for me, because I hardly ever see it. I think you caught him very well. I also like that Tony didn't really fight him, because he could have, if he wanted too.

All of it, very well done.
Mel72000 chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
Thank you for this chapter !
shopgirl2547 chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
I always liked Thor cause ppl look at him and see what they want to c! They don't c that he's smart capable and a natural born leader. But even better is that Thor sees the truth threw all the b.s! Loved this update! This fic is so emotional I can imagine ur exhausted from it but its really good!
Ppleater chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
It makes sense that Tony would feel alright with a gay guy touching him, and I bet Cassie felt that safety too. Same way they felt better around women; no sexual threat.
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