Reviews for In His Eyes (Obsession)
fruupke chapter 7 . 5/4
I know it has been a very long time, but I would love to read more of your story. I love how you captured Christian. This is the Christian I expected. I love this story and I hope that one day you will continue.
maddy chapter 7 . 12/29/2014
OMG please continue
Constance Ryan chapter 7 . 4/30/2014
Please update this story.
AHDSK chapter 7 . 10/29/2013
It's a shame you didn't continue this story I thought it was very interesting and intriguing.
Catblue196 chapter 7 . 6/25/2013
sillie j chapter 7 . 3/9/2013
Quite intense. I am intrigued about where you'll be taking Christian. Already when I was reading the "original" I expected something quite different from book 2 and 3 than what I got, this is closer to what I expected. Given that Christian raises all the red flags of an abuser, it's nice to see someone takes him in that direction as well. Please write more.

ps. You could benefit from a beta, your writing is alive, but the grammar/spelling/choice of words is very off at times and enough to be disturbing too. I'd favourite the story if it wasn't for that.
dagmar-rudbeck chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Eu gosto muito desta historia. Espero q voce a cintinue
lilithblood chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
hey, first of all love your fanfiction!
this review was originally suppose to be for chapter 7 but i already reviewed it and it didnt showed up so yeah :-S
well honestly i think the way you are writing this story is quite daring!
i have read alot of twilight fanfictions, and although Edward Cullen is originally a very gentle and humble character writers have taken deep plunges and write him with as many versatile personalities as possible!
he is written as a doctor, addict, nasty, pornstar(lol), sadist, masochist, rapist, smuggler, human trafficker, sweet, mobster, cheater, totally in love, etc etc endless characters!
now to the original topic i have seen in fifty shades trilogy fandom that writers are not very daring and out their besides you!
and trust me cheating stories are over rated! have gotten sick of them!
its like when they don't get new plot ideas they say ok let's write a cheating Story because Christian has been with women and you know he should cheat (sarcasm).
anyhow, about Christian grey's personality i think you have gotten the hand of it and have captured it quite logically and realistically!
i personally think that Christian is capable of having an extreme dark personality, he is capable of extreme sadism, rape, kidnap blackmail etc. the dude is a sadist, he gets off on beating girls, yes i said it he is capable of that even in the original trilogy!
he is a multi billionaire, used to getting his way in life, he does hostile takeover of companies if doesn't get his way, control everything, women bend at his will, he practically has everything a man can dream of, now imagine him being obsessed and in love with a girl, who doesn't want to give a shit about him, how will he react?
as we know that he has never had a romantic or emotional relationship so he has nothing to be referred tp or compare to! so he will react in the only way he knows, the man is overly possessive and territorial of his possession even if he holds no sentiment towards them, he doesn't share not even his business now imagine him being in love and obsessed with something!
i hope i have made a correct analogy, hope this gives you something to work with!
and yes please please update soon,
takecare! :-D
lilithblood chapter 5 . 1/3/2013
i reviewed y cant i see it? :-(
BlueDiamondStar chapter 7 . 12/27/2012
Although weird for me, but I really like this story. And it's something way past the curiousness of the original story and it's verse in fanfiction, it's probably the character complexity.
To say, it's something attracting. And sure this one's mighty attractive story. I'm amazed by Christian here, and original too. It sure takes some deep understanding to write this fic.
kturner1187 chapter 5 . 12/26/2012
Wow! Great story very dark! I like the fact it takes the characters and turns the story in a different direction! Thank you!
thorn chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
please update
Guest chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
Christian Grey might be all kinds of F**ked up but he would NEVER be a rapist.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
loved it more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!.
Tammy chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
Wow, not sure about this Christian. surely this is almost attempted rape. I can lived with obsessed but not an abusive Christian. Hope I got this wrong and he see sense
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