Reviews for Night At The Rave
littlemichiru chapter 1 . 11/12
I loved it. Really good descriptions. I am not the party dancing girl but reading this I wished I was in that place too. I loved the vibe. Yami was incredible. There was an exotic and erotic vibe there. I loved how he saw yugi dancing and became mesmerized. Then how he had yugi dancing for him but the whole club could see. And the love scene was erotic but not over the top. Wonderful story.
mykkiaworthington chapter 1 . 8/22
Please write a second chappy about that date plz?! :) love the story
winged sapphire wolf chapter 1 . 6/10
Ashley: That was awesome~
Crystal: The ending was so cute.
Sapphire: Awesome story hun!
MillenniumBakura chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
This was really well written! Dance club fics with yugi and Yami are my favourite, and yours is the best one I've read so far!
zaybrallia13 chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Oh make a story about what happen at the date and beyond what happens after..
Pllzzzz
mykkia.worthington.7 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Gosh! So hot! Or its just the fact its 90 outside. joking ! . but really great story! I wonder what happened at the dinner?
Yugi: uumm...*blushing*
Yami: i liked it! :) * grins at yugi *
Yugi: Ooooohhhh CRAP! No! No,no,no! Please don't get any ideas from this! Please! *deep blushing*
Yami: TOO LATE! :) * pounces on yugi kissing him to death*
Yugi: MMMMMMMHHHHHHHFFFFFF!
Me: *giggles*
tavia454 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
I don't mean to sound critical but Yugi's eyes are amethyst not indigo. But I love the story. :)
Amanda27A.g chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
that was wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
toooooo awesome
UnorthodoxDreamer chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I love this. I'll be clam and hope typing this doesn't kill me when I'd rather be running up and down the halls, screaming "OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!" and being awed at your skills. I wish I could write like that. I might be able to but being sleep deprived all the time doesn't really help matters. Anywho I loved your story and I'd say more but I really got to release all the fangirl energy. (did it halfway through your story too.)
Kat chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
OMGOGMOMGOMGOMGMOGMOGMOGMGMGOMOMGOGMOGMOGMOGMOGMOG MGOMGOGMOGM this made me fangril sqell SOO MUCH AHHHHHHHHHH SO AWSOME! YES I LOVED IT WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! AHHHH
Charlie chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Wow! LOVED IT :D
You should totally do a sequel! :D
dplusjluv21 chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Loved it!
Little Neko Yugi chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
That was amazing. Your detail and your writing skills are why I have always been a fan of yours and why I love it when I get an alert for a new story. Your attention to detail is simply awesome. I could really imagine what you wrote (which is hard for some of these writers to hit just right like you do) I would super super happy if you created a sequel! I'm sure a lot of other people would be too
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