Hahah.. It's cute and funny.. I totally agree in the last line.. xD

That was pretty funny! I could definitely see Blank and Zidane making bets about this like getting the girl! I love how you didn't have it end there, though, and continued it with the bet about Zidane and Dagger's first child being a boy! Too cute!

Hahaha nice! I like the emphasis on competition between Blank and Zidane, it's something we only really see early on in the game. Well done!

Got dang it those two are great. Loved it. Totally them.

-OuRex

Really enjoyed this short one-shot! :) Love the interaction between Blank and Zidane; seems just like them to get shitfaced right before a big job haha XD Have any plans to write any more Tantalus material in the future? Because this stuff's downright fantastic :)

This is so cute! I think you got both of their personalities perfect and the way they acted around eachother was just great. I hope you get hit with more Final Fantasy IX ideas, because you're an excellent writer and you do the characters so well!

Really well written. You got the characters spot on.

Nice. Everybody was in character and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Mystic