Reviews for Colourful Melodies
SnarkyAndProudHufflepuff chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
This was a really sweet/adorable one-shot of Lucy and Lorcan, admittedly they are one of my favorite possible couples in Next-Gen. I love the clear affection that they have for each other you characterized them beautifully.

There was one sentence that sounded awkward when I read it however, but they had never really spoken much together, That just sounded awkward to me; perhaps say something like but they had never really spoken towards each other much or something similar.

But other than that this was a wonderful one-shot great job.
The Original Horcrux chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Ah sorry it took me so long to review! I honestly thought I wasn't going to get one because I never have in previous fic exchanges :( but thank you sosososo much for this. It was beautiful and I loved the playful banter between Lucy and Lysander about both of their hobbies and the flashback to how they both became closer was just adorable. You have successfully broken my feels. I can't - I have lost the ability to can. GAH I love them so much *snuggles* thank you so much for this! Xxx
Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Lucy/Lysander! I love this pairing so much. It's like my second or third favourite next-gen pairing.

Anywho, this was sweet and quite original too. I think the title is brilliant, by the way. Very clever.

And... yeah, I just loved this.
DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
:) Aww, that was really sweet. The part about the children's hospital was sad, yet happy in the way you described the children's excitement at Lucy and Lysander. I like the style you wrote this in, and didn't see any SPaG errors. :)

The only suggestion I have is to not italicize the description of how they became friends. It seemed to be a bit... I don't know. :P But I think it would flow better not italicized.
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Sweet. Keep writing