Reviews for The Fall of Percy Jackson
Alex Fierro chapter 2 . 10/11
It's a good story but the way you switch POVs Is really confusing
Guest chapter 8 . 9/17
There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. Its now not bow
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9
Jack golden chapter 1 . 7/6
The telkines weren’t trying to free typhon they were instead creating Kronos sythe
Ashley chapter 13 . 6/12
You better make Percy good again. OR ELSE!
Ashley chapter 1 . 6/12
If you must turn Annabeth and Percy evil at least make sure they have a happy ending and turn good again.
Ashley chapter 22 . 6/12
I hate it! How dare you make Annabeth and Percy evil! Its terrible!
yeet chapter 25 . 5/15
I love this series, despite spelling errors I like the style, can't wait for the sequel
Karasulives chapter 10 . 5/7
If it was me I’d just join Percy.
abracadabrasaur chapter 7 . 4/15
I happen to love the name concept! This is great! :D
Regan chapter 1 . 4/13
Unknown chapter 25 . 4/9
"The Fall of Percy Jackson" was an addicting reading. Although, I do think you should spend some time on grammar and spelling. I have notice that you used the phrase, "as black as night", in the first few chapters after Percy Jackson turns. Anyway, I loved your story layout and all of the dark details.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/31
Wow. I love this story SO much!Even if Percy was evil and all. What was Zeus thinking, Banishing Percy to Tartarus?Welp. Honestly though, It would be nice if Percy beat Zeus. That would really enlighten my mood.
Guest chapter 25 . 3/28
What is the sequels name
Guest chapter 9 . 3/4
I love this story! keep up the great work!
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