I am so excited to see that you’ve edited /updated this story. It is one of my favorites and is so under recommended.

I wanted to let you know that I think you have an extra word in the last paragraph, second to last sentence. It reads “getting beginning to get.”

If you ever want a beta message more or leave a comment on one of my stories on AO3 - Astrangefan.

Rally enjoying this story! You have made the character really true to the books!

I download as epubs and am trying to make more of an effort to actively comment. This is easily one of my new favorite fics of all time. You do slow burn so genius. I am obsessed with the dynamic between D & H in this fic. You give them such real, raw thoughts and emotions. They aren’t perfect and hell they might not be perfect for each other but they love and care for one another enough to try to make it work. I love how you characterise Draco. I love how you make Hermione right and wrong all at once. I love love love this story and I can’t wait to keep reading!

Pansy!

The majority of the storey was great and well written. I didnt like some of the side pairings, byt it didnt take away from the Dramione story. The last 2 chapters felt rushed and forced. VERY different writing style and that created a jarring affect that kept taking me out of the story. I found myself skimming to just get to the end, only to discover that the story is continued in a second book.

I feel like I won't like Hermione very much about this fanfic, first she begging Draco to save her, which I think is kind of stupid and cowardly, then she cursing him for saving her, like ? What do you want, my dear? The boy risked his ass to save you and you are an ungrateful woman, I bet she will be one of those hermiones that some authors write and I find it particularly difficult to read, a broken, weak, cowardly hermione that depends on others to save her, I will read about 2 more chapters, and if that's the case I'll let you, future readers, if it's really worth reading this story or if you can jump out at once.

Antes que nada solo quiero aclarar que la historia esta muy buena… super buena, pero no puedeo evitar sentirme frustada con Hermione…por Dios, me desesperaaa! como puede ser tan patética!

Oh my! Maybe the best fic ive read in YEARS. Wow wow wow. Draco was perfect. The way you develop your characters is... Another league. So glad I found this story! I ve been reading dramiones for 11 years now, and after El diario de la mascara by Mad Aristocrat, this one turned out to be my new favorite one.

you are the coward granger for hiding your relationship.

Granger is a fucking bitch. hiding her relationship and lying. she don't deserve Draco period...

you guys are assholes for keeping him down there. Jerks.

Granger is a bitch. He couldn't help, but he did help her so she be grateful.

I love this story! Draco is just so perfectly in character, and I absolutely love Project CHUM!

So, sex scenes don’t really offend me, but this seemed a bizarre course for a man that was distraught over his father. Just didn’t feel like it flowed with the rest of the story. He’s disgusted by seeing his dad rape a Muggle, then he tells Hermione to get on her knees in a way that would be similar to his father?

️ just marking my place