|Reviews for Birds and Bows|
| Senza pieta chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Well-written and very sweet. The way you write feels very IC and makes me wonder what Jason's tenure as Robin would have been like if his mom WERE alive.
You have a few grammatical issues that are easily fixed:
["Ugh, go away." complains Jason] should be
"Ugh, go away," complains Jason
["It's all you ever wanted." Artemis says] should be
"It's all you ever wanted," Artemis says
and so on. If a sentence continues after a character speaks, use a comma instead of a period inside the quotation marks to end their dialogue. (Exclamation points and question marks stay the same.)
And one more thing, which is nitpicky, and I wouldn't point it out if the story weren't quite so good already: Tempest and Aquagirl were on the Team before Jason was, so unless you purposefully excluded them during the group shot, they would have been there with the others.
Anyway, I hope you don't mind the little critiques-I really do like this a lot.
| kickarora chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
write dat story resurection trump robins i will read and review a thousand times : )
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Although the story made me smile, the author's comment and the bit at the end with "You don't even go here" made me burst out into laughter! Hilarious and I can totally see Artemis having a broship with Jason and leaving Dick out. Great job!