|Reviews for Perseus The Peacekeeper, Son of Chaos|
| Artemisisboss chapter 14 . 8/9
you need to check your spelling but otherwise really good.
| Anonymouse chapter 21 . 7/30
| anonymouse chapter 1 . 7/30
(note i dont actually mean this just frustrated at the overall lack of inheritance fanfictions)YOU READ ERAGON ALL THE WAY THROUGH, AND YOU HAVENT MADE EVEN A SINGLE CHAPTER OF IT YOU PIECE OF SH.T
| This is a name 42 chapter 18 . 7/9
| This is a name 42 chapter 17 . 7/9
Zues' rant at the beginning reminded me of the song 'glass of water' that's in my little pony. Yes I'm a brony deal with it!
| This is a name 42 chapter 9 . 7/9
When the battle was commencing I was listening to Guren No Yumiya
| This is a name 42 chapter 8 . 7/9
No! No no! God! No ! No!
| Polarman2002 chapter 21 . 7/7
Hello. Is the story still available? I am interested in adopting it. I like this story a lot and I think it has lots of potential. It could use a little me-ness. I realise it has been a long time, but seeing as it isn't deleted or under someone else's name, I assume that you are still looking. Please respond by posting another chapter with your response. I am new at FanFiction. Thank You
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/28
Great story, but Percy and Artemis together ( insert threw up) sorry it is just me ( don't kill me) but other than that great story
| GeminiHaddock chapter 8 . 5/22
What!? Looney Tunes is a great show! *crosses arms and pouts*
| GeminiHaddock chapter 7 . 5/22
Pertemis for thy win!
| Aviendhaphiragon chapter 7 . 5/21
So, when Percy was talking to Ares, he said, "Think before you attack, asses your opponent first".What you meant was assESS, not assES. Asses is actually the plural of ass. Assess is pronounced with the emphasis on the last syllable, asses has an emphasis on the first.
I know you didn't mean that; I just thought I should let you know that you unintentionally put a swear word in your writing. Lol.
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/8
you Should said that was a good fight if that's what you call a fight
| Cliffy NO2 chapter 7 . 2/27
No you aint evil
the cliffuy wont affect me
| tharmoftapercyjackson chapter 8 . 2/10
about the not writing lemons IKR! when people write lemons in their stories it makes me feel uncomfortable and stuff and i usually skip...
BTW good story!