|Reviews for The Start of a Family|
| rescue 007 chapter 13 . 5/16
Y u no update?!
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/14
| Bobtrumpet chapter 13 . 6/28/2016
I know you're still writing as well as probably readingbyour reviews. Please, you just can't leave this story here. It's begging to be finished, you know it is. Even more than Kim and Ron were in this last chapter.
Following, and hopeful for a completion.
| Bobtrumpet chapter 8 . 6/10/2016
The storybis progressing nicely. One glaring problem: "pure adultery joy?" I think you meant "unadulterated."
| superboltstrike chapter 13 . 9/19/2015
This is a good story. I hope you don't abandon it.
| was alright chapter 13 . 7/28/2015
The build up was great but you let it end way to soon. Other downside is that this entire story is peppered with errors from lack of commas to words not fitting their place and a glaring issue where sentences didn't have the word in it or ending it (as if the word just up and left its place). Unique is this story but its place, in this sites Kim Possible category, is sadly below where it should be.
| Anon chapter 13 . 3/30/2015
Good story please continue
| Q chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Type your review continue
| Van chapter 13 . 1/18/2015
Please, continue. I really like the plot and how you write. Please.
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/2/2014
Lmao keep going plz
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/20/2014
| babiluv22 chapter 13 . 10/16/2014
update update update update update soon please please please please please please update
| nw150 chapter 13 . 9/7/2014
Pls update soon!
| Robot Wolf 26Z chapter 13 . 8/19/2014
"You Snuck your way into my heart" by Love Handel and "I'm Fabulous'" by Bobby Fabulous of Love Handel, Phineas and Ferb episode "Dude We're Getting the band back together"
| Leticia chapter 13 . 7/25/2014
I love this story please continue