Reviews for Liz:The Unknown Savior
rkoviperx4x chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
Let me tell you a little about what happened here,I'm totally new to fanfiction and your story here is the first story ever that I read...
And it impressed me so so so much that I just created an account right now just to give a review to u ! :D :)
I wanna talk to you author ! And also tell me about your other works... just rock !
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Gigigue chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
"Blimey! It's an over-sized sonic screwdriver!" Haha! I loved that. Oh, and I noticed something else which was cool: "...tap the tip onto the top..." Alliteration! And I love Rachel's conversation with Aragorn. So awkward! And then, "Have I ever told you of the time I broke the king's chin?" That would be so funny. And Rachel's an animagus? Sweet... And she gets to be a snow leopard which is pretty cool. I didn't like the swearing though.

Spelling: Fundin, not Hundin; Oakenshield not Oakensheild; nocked not knocked.
Gigigue chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
I love how Liz annoys Sam.

Overall, I really like this story! I like how you really define Liz as a prankster/jokester kind of person. However, there are a few plot holes, and some grammar issues. These things could be easily fixed with a good beta-reader. I will definitely continue to follow this story, as I really want to know how this pans out. :)
Gigigue chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
"Ohmygosh, are you a ninja?!" Poor Aragorn, to be greeted by that. Best line said to Aragorn ever! Oh poor Liz, forever embarrassed by tripping in front of Legolas. I would die of mortification.

Spelling: Glorfindel, not Glorofindel.
Gigigue chapter 3 . 6/9/2013
I started cracking up when I read Liz's first comeback. That's genius! And I also laughed at Liz's last line.

Spelling: King Thranduil, not King Thranduir.
Gigigue chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
The chapter was a little short, and there are a couple time skips, but it was a good chapter. I really like the Star Wars reference. :) (Although it is Obi-Wan, not Obi-One. Unless that was intentional. Then you're good.)
Gigigue chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
That was pretty good! :) I love the idea of Dumbledore and Gandalf being half-brothers. I also like the idea of having the Grey Havens actually be Earth. Something to muse about when I'm bored... There were three spelling mistakes I noticed (I'm a spelling freak): psychic not physic, vial not vile, and pensieve not pensive.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Un-introduced OC characters? No thank you!
RealReview chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
You know its been a while since I saw such a balant mary-sue self-insert fix in this section that wasn't a troll-fic. If you are a troll you are a very good one, and praise to you for that.

3/10 (Points for not utterly mangled spelling)
JumperRedHead chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Ha ha ha! !
JumperRedHead chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Funny funny funny
GreatIceDragon chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Aragorn is MUCH more attractive than Baby face McLongbow, a.k.a Legolas.
JumperRedHead chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Keep it up. It is great! AWESOME!
GreatIceDragon chapter 2 . 12/24/2012
How stylish!
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