|Reviews for And the Wolves All Cry|
| acelenny chapter 1 . 11/26
Well, this was rather good. Could it have been improved in place, yes. Does that it any way detract from the quality of the writing or the idea behind the story? No. Very nicely done.
| ElmEnchanter chapter 1 . 11/22
This is... so beautiful. Amazing story. Quite fast paced, which is not my usual kind of read, but this is SO so worth it.
| koriolanus chapter 1 . 10/27
What a redemption arc. You really captured so much complexity with your characterization of Snape, and it's a wonderful reminder of how people's decisions aren't black and white. Bravo - such a pleasure to read!
| xxxQueenxxx chapter 1 . 10/25
I'm crying, yes I am. You did a wonderful job on this one-shot, it's well-written and touching. It kind of remind me of the Holocaust maybe it was doing on purpose ?
| AMProngs chapter 1 . 9/21
I've said in many a comments that I cried while this story and that but it's usually just teary eyes or immense sadden. Tears have never really dropped out of my yes. So I've never really cried reading fan fiction. Mind you, I only read James and Lily fan fiction and since these are characters who died... Anyway, I cried reading this story. It started around when Hermione got in the picture. My eyes were streaming with tears. I kept reading and kept crying. At some point I broke down in sobs so I got myself together real quickly so that happened for like a second. I've cried and sobbed reading books and I can tell you now that I'm Deathly Hallows when we finally get to read how James and Lily died, I had tears running down my face and sobbed for a bit before getting myself together and reading on. It was inevitable since I got tears running down my eyes when Harry and Hermione visited James and Lily's graves, and lost it when I read about how they got murdered. I've imagined many what could have been where JILY is concerned.
Anyway, the amount suffering in your story and that of JK where they die early on, I just don't know which I prefer. It's just not as easy as just choosing them living. It's the suffering that's had torn. I don't want to spoil the ending for anyone but I'm torn between this and JK's. But above all, thank you for this story. Didn't realize how much HP was like the concentration camps.
| genevieveyoung chapter 1 . 9/15
Oh my god. That was awful and horrifying, but also so good. It was well written and totally different from what one usually finds. I have zero regrets about reading this, even though my heart cracked in two.
| Klarinette49 chapter 1 . 9/6
I'm slowly but surely going through all your works and this was again such a wonderful reading, I couldn't stop reading until way past my bedtime. So many things in this story that made me tear up and then so many that were also so heartwarming. I was so happy to see Hermione, I did not expect to see her in this story and that was the perfect addition. The relationship between Lily and James and Sirius is so well written. It's definitely a fic I will read again and again and again. Thank you!
| multifandomheart chapter 1 . 9/3
I... have no words that could express the emotions this story made me feel. The fact that Hermione was included, and how Andromeda died, and James and Sirius and Remus were in Azkaban, and the Menial District being like the concentration camps during the Holocaust; it pulled and tugged at my heartstrings and I don't think I've ever loved a fanfiction more. Thank you for writing this, I honestly wish it was the canon story.
| crescented chapter 1 . 8/5
This is a masterpiece. I love how you incorporated Hermione into this, and the little tidbit about Sirius not asking after her and that James would've done the same. Thank you for this!
| Andellethrush chapter 1 . 7/6
This is a great story! It might even be the best fanfic I've ever read. I like how you added Hermione in there. Mabye someday you can update it, though I doubt that. Anyways, I can tell your a great writer. I bet you could write a book if you wanted to! Anyways, this review was to just gush over how awsome I think your writing is! Sorry for rambling and all, but seriously! This is great. I hope you have a great life, and all.
| Abby chapter 1 . 6/25
Absolutely incredible. This touched me so much I almost felt like it was canon. You're a fantastic writer. You captured every emotion without being cliche, and you built characters that were real and tangible. I loved every word.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Huh I always thought his heart was bleeding. Could have sworn on it too.
| ABZB13 chapter 1 . 6/15
| Enilorac Eiram chapter 1 . 6/12
Someone in the Jily tag on Tumblr was looking for this and it helped me remember that this was a damn good fic! You write beautifully and weave an incredible story. I'm faving this so I never ever lose it again.
| Julia chapter 1 . 6/2
Just wanted to let you know Frank longbottom doesn't die and lily and James die when Harry is one