|Reviews for Beyond|
| Jazzola chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Wow. Just... wow. So very true to the characters, such a wonderful emotional journey- I love it.
And Annie shoving Gene up against a filing cabinet? Haha, yes please...
Jazzola (aka Xys on Livejournal, but that site's down so I'll review here too)
| GeneHuntress chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
That was a lovely piece of writing, rebel - insightful, poignant and totally believable. I would very much like to read the story from Gene's perspective. Bring it on!
Happy New Year and all the best for 2013. *Accepts bubbly gratefully and clinks glasses* :) xx
| Curms chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
Oh wow, that was absolutely fantastic, well done rebelxxxwaltz !
| Littleotter73 chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
Bravo! I know you say there are things you aren't quite happy with, but seriously, this is a beautifully written fic. The emotions so real, the imagery so vivid. I especially loved the way you wrote the first encounter between Gene and Annie. The emotions that were driving them were so incredibly intense and you navigated them with such precision. It was more about them than the sex, the need to feel, the need to be alive, but the underlying sex was hot and engaging.
The relationship you built between Gene and Annie was perfect. Gene's tenderness comes through perfectly and I really liked the lack of angst between the characters. They knew what they were doing, they knew they still needed to be professional, and they knew what gave each other what the other needed as well as taking for themselves. It actually was perfect as they mourned someone they both loved with a fierce intensity.
I really enjoyed this story. Loved it in fact. I think the ending was fitting, tying in with the Ashes to Ashes canon. Very well done and beautifully written.
I want to bundle up Annie and Gene and never let them go!
| Littleotter73 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Wow! This is an amazing start! The imagery is vivid, the point of view from Annie is very in character, the characters feel true to canon, the narrative style is engaging, and I was hooked from the first few sentences. I love "what if" and "what happened next" stories that fit into canon.
I wanted to review on the other site, because, you know, it's what I do, but it's down right now. Wankers.
Seriously, this fic has me going asdfjkl;asldjf! It's hard to find the right words, but I love love love it!
| GeneHuntress chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Really enjoyed this, rebel. Gene and Annie seemed so in character and the development of a symbiotic, although potentially destructive relationship was totally believable.
Looking forwards to seeing where you go with it next. :)