|Reviews for The Evolution of Fear|
| 07-Ghost-Kuroyuri chapter 17 . 2/26
Aghhhhh! Your fanfiction is so beautifully written! I'm stoked for the next chapter if you're currently writing it! ( ͈ ॢꇴ ͈ॢ)･* you go girl!
| Fallenangel9005 chapter 1 . 1/18
The message below was a nice threat stating that the story is great and if it does not continue then Scarecrow would be very upset.
| Fallenangel9005 chapter 17 . 1/18
It's simply not safe to not continue to write this story.
| Crow's Talon chapter 17 . 1/17
This continues to be a really interesting piece. As always, I love the interaction between the characters - the personalities of Falcone and Crane came across very well, and Crane's disdain for Falcone was very clear. I imagine this may be setup for what Crane eventually does to him. I love all the little personality moments for Crane, such as his dislike of alcohol and how he is unafraid of Falcone. Crane's revenge at the end of the chapter was another great (and frightening) moment. I'm still searching for the Poe reference, so no internet points for me.
I'm interested to see where this story goes - your take on Crane is terrifying and, as usual, very well-written. Excellent job!
| Just-Me-and-My-Brain chapter 17 . 1/14
AHH! You write Crane so perfectly! I love it! Thank you for updating
| Cookie VanDeKamp chapter 17 . 1/14
I LOVED Carmine Falcone in this chapter. I can't wait for the next update... I'm already looking forward to his confrontation with Batman.
| Cookie VanDeKamp chapter 8 . 1/14
I was both looking forward to send dreading what would happen in this chapter... and you didn't disappoint! Keep up the great writing.
| Cookie VanDeKamp chapter 2 . 1/14
I know he'll turn out to be an evil bastard and all, but.. Poor Jonathan! I can't wait to keep reading!
| Silenthunder chapter 17 . 1/12
Again a gap in BB is filled. Nice work. You aren't afraid to have more than just a few paragraphs on emotions, thoughts and descriptions - a good thing. Update please!
| michelle1203 chapter 17 . 1/12
I can just see crane swallowing disgust with the whiskey and cigars. Great Falcone characterization
| Crow's Talon chapter 16 . 1/4
This s great! I continue to enjoy the way you write Crane - his desire for power and control suit him, and it's interesting to see Ra's use them to recruit him. The interaction between Crane and Ra's was another highlight - you captured both characters' personalities and interactions excellently. I loved the mix of emotions Crane feels in this chapter - anxiety, anger, and curiosity, and how he recognizes that his experiments are becoming ingrained in his life both at night and during the day. As always, I love your writing style.
I like how appearance means so much to Crane - he dislikes looking sloppy or careless, and he's very meticulous about detail, which suits him nicely. Ra's was completely in character, and seeing him interact with Crane was fantastic, especially when he surprised Crane by revealing that he had infiltrated Arkham. The ending makes for a great cliffhanger, and I'm looking forward to what happens next.
| Jasmine Scarthing chapter 16 . 1/4
Hi! Good fic. I like how you wrote Crane.
| michelle1203 chapter 16 . 1/4
Ra's! Oh man it's about to get even more real!
| Silenthunder chapter 16 . 1/4
WOW...R'as al Ghul makes an appearance...definitely did not see that coming...
Scared, Scarecrow? LOL
You captured Ra's perfectly, straight to business. (And if he acts like he did in AC, then I'm wondering how Crane'll react...)
| ASouffleToServeTwo chapter 16 . 1/4
This chapter was EPIC. You portrayed Ra's perfectly! Well Done! :D