Reviews for One Night
holly snowden chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
really cute I loved it
shaunamariec chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Such an amazing, emotional short story! Been reading you're fanfiction over the past few days and you're a great writer!
Luc91 chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
Loved this. You are such a good writer :)
OTHSBERKB chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Aw that was a perfect conclusion to an amazing story. The way you tell the story is so good and I always love reading the stuff you write. Good luck with your next story, I can't wait to read it! :)
KlarolinexDelenaxx chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
sorry that Guest review was from me, i forgot i wasn't signed in.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
i love it, i like how you referanced back to what was said in the beginning of the first chapter " the god from that one night" "and the sex was amazing" how you keep using that is great, gets the point across that they are obvisouly gonna be having sex all the time when they can again :) also Lauren was peregnant at the end i am guessing :D
KlarolinexDelenaxx chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
its amazing, your writing style is just perfect, i guessed that they didn't know who each other were near the beginning then i twigged that she was pregnant when Max was speaking to her on the stairs and i love how when her Mum rang her she said i'll be fine, its only one night... which is obviously what the title meant the one night she had sex with her cousin, the one night she was home alone and the one night she gave birth... can't wait for the next chapter :D xx
OTHSBERKB chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Wow that was intense and emotional and I wasn't expecting any of it! Amazingly well written as always and I look forward to the next part tomorrow! :)