|Reviews for In Flight Gaiden: A New Dawn|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/1
Rin does not have a dim view on technology, she might be inept in its usage but the VN pretty much starts with Rin waxing poetic about how awesome technology is; she has a great appreciation and respect for science.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/1
That's not how Rule Breaker works. If it can affect Heroic Spirits, it sure as hell can affect a puny modern day mystic code.
| Paxloria chapter 8 . 3/11
having 5 Counter Guardian Emiya's is a genius idea! The only thing that could top THAT would be if the 5 of them somehow meet Shirou in Shin Tokyo.
In the latest confrontation between Shirou and Karabusa, you forgot to have him through something at the Sekire.
I look forward to reading more soon.
| Paxloria chapter 3 . 3/10
huh, if it took that much effort to send someone after Zelretch, then how do they expect their agent to return?
Shirou is already distorted to begin with, so maybe that crystal wont have much of an effect on him...?
For the previous chapter:
If Shirou made more food than they can all eat for dinner then there should be no reason to immediately go shopping since they can have leftover.
| Paxloria chapter 2 . 3/10
Wonder how Hiroto Minako, Magus & CEO of MBI will feel when he sees Zelretch on his camera's!
| Paxloria chapter 1 . 3/10
This really IS similar to "IN FLIGHT" by Gabriel blessing and seems to be a spinn-off of that story just like "THE EMERALD BLADE" by SaintInfernalNeos, even starts in a similar way (exept it starts further back in the timestream and its not a Green Lantern Ring that Zelretch took).
What reality did Zelretch get that 'crystal' from?
| Luna's Meow chapter 6 . 2/13
Three years. Three years and nothing. A Soul of Fire is getting all the love and I don't find it even *half* as interesting. It is at the end of it's rope, where there is no more significant plot to happen, just waiting for the last embers of the flame with the big boss battle that we all know is coming. This though? This is at it's prime, where the interesting stuff just starts happening. We need more! Please!
Odd that only Akitsu got Light when she kissed him though. Sure the others have been winged already, but since they drink of his od every time they kiss, one would think that the Light would go too and improve them, especially with them being part of him in some ways now. Hopefully he'll at least be able to force it into them in the future if he tries? Like... push Light through with the od consciously when they kiss? Because otherwise Akitsu is just gonna steal the spotlight. She already outcleassed the others. With Solar power improving her? The others need it just to balance things out.
| Swordude chapter 8 . 10/5/2015
Bwahahaha! make it stop, it's too much! Every time I think it's going to calm down you add something new you magnificent bastard. Keep 'em coming. I love it.
| zachary2 chapter 8 . 9/11/2015
Hup, hup HURRAY!
| Luna's Meow chapter 7 . 9/12/2014
I just had a thought. I was watching UBW, and when Shiro cut off Gilgamesh's arm, the sword Ea fell into the ground in Shiro's Reality Marble. Just like the swords that were already there from UBW.
Now, if UBW is the materialization of the soul, and that world goes back inside of him one the spell ends... Shouldn't Ea now be inside of him as well? Much like Avalon, shouldn't UBW route Shiro now have yet another true Noble Phantasm held inside his body? One that he doesn't need to copy, especially since he *can't*, but can summon outside of himself and use? How would having such an Alien thing inside of him affect him? His magecraft? His circuits? How would Avalon react to it? The sheathe of Excalibur, being mixed with the sword Ea instead of it's intended blade?
| Telron chapter 8 . 7/1/2014
LOL you must update this since this is epically hilarious so far. I look forward to seeing what happens next now
| Luna's Meow chapter 8 . 6/29/2014
Are you still willing to write this? Loving this whole Solar Exalted thing you've put me on. Getting way too into reading up on it now. Looks interesting.
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 8 . 5/16/2014
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 7 . 5/16/2014
Watch out, Shirou!
| FanFicReader712012 chapter 6 . 5/16/2014