Nice reference to Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagan

I am not sure that I like this story. I think the reason for this is both what makes this story good and puts me off on it. Shirou, or more spificly the way he acts in this story. I acepted the changes you have made to his character as belivable alterations to the time line. In fact you have created a wholy uniqu take on him that I haven't seen anywhere else. However it is a take that I dont like. To me Shirou is a sword. He makes them, wilds them, knows them completly. The Fire Shirou to me is too caotic. Without backgroud work I am left filling in his back story with how I think Shirou would have turned out being raised by the priest. However without thte events of the Grail war to complet the picture my mind keeps comparing the Sword to the Flame. The compairision just isn't fair as I love the Sword as a character and there isn't enough of the Flame to make a valad pros vs cons list in my head. There there is the Sekieri plot and introducing new characters into that already complacated secnerio that I feel that your just just using this universe as a way to flesh out your character becasue of the fame of In Flight. However your not telling the story of the Sekieri, or Shirou, in this story. It seems that your telling Homara's story at this point as he has the most propectives so far. One thing I do rather enjoy, and I am not sure you do it for this reason, but Shirou's precption is always first person as if distorted from everyone elses. It's quirky and makes it interesting, but if you use it for anyone besides Shirou it will ruine it.

I whish you luck in this story, I also recemend you finish the grail war in your other story. That way your not referecning things that happed in it and your audience not know whats going on with it. What ever you decide I would just like to thank you for this story. Whil I didn't enjoy it to the extent of some Fate/ Stay Night works it is also fare better them many I could name. Thank you for the story.

Tsukiumi reacting to Rin?

Oddly fitting. Or not so oddly. Gahaha :D

Really finding the plot to be both convoluted and engaging. Definitely some characters I wouldn't mind seeing lit on fire till they are dead but it doesn't detract from the overall story. Would be interested in seeing more in the future.

Lots of fun new developments. I really hope that this story is continued if I can expect more fun like this.

Enjoying the story so far. Couple of interesting turns that will be fun to see play out.

That was intriguing. Think I will enjoy this story if this is how it starts.

nice chapter, the relationship developments were nice and the Matsu/Nero scene was both amusing and informative, I'm curious about the script on the bones though, I'm looking forward to the reveal for that, update soon

Bromura! -wipes tears- I'm so proud of u.

Takami should still live MBI.

She's lost control over the very things she's supposed to protect. How can she do her job? She's supposed to be a Department Head, instead she's become a lackey.

She should leave. Minaka obviously thinks she won't, given his breath of relief. All the more reason to write that she DOES leave.

Homura is the better choice for the omake when it comes to comedy :)

This really is a breath of fresh air. It's wonderful to read anything Sekirei-related where female characters who want to wing the protagonist don't just get a free pass to intrude into their lives by means of a 'most compatible mate' guilt-trip. Frankly, I think Shirou's Grail War Girls are more than enough for him to have to deal with, and while it might sound harsh, I'm not exactly going to shed any tears if he never learns to reciprocate Matsu's feelings. To say nothing of adding Kazehana to the mix.

And I just love Madman Executor Shirou. Probably the greatest of all Shirou types, and that includes Archer.

Be interesting to see just what Mr Black has done with the Sekirei plan. Can't wait to find out more.

Please update soon

good omake and the lettering scares me with what it could mean

awesome dude. and yeah homura is the one to really set the bar of that altered yet still epic quote. i am really looking forward to the next one. until then, ja!